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01-29-04, 11:17 PM | #1 | |||
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Lyrical Fitness/Collab
IP: 1481 46A3
I don't think they ready for this shit man....Leave them dihydrated ya heard...
TheUnderRated: I'm at the highest point above an observers horizon... volcano flow although only get attention when i'm geysin.. Ready release realness till I succumb to exhaustion... spit grief through my teeth often.....definin lyrical flossin... train often to spit through coughins fuck me ever stoppin lyrically hospitalized the only way you'll ever be chart toppin... you see the veins in my head poppin out telekinetically trainin.. wise ways and Rated collabed now they open mic reignin.. I'm benchin vocab likes it nothing though i got a ton on.. wise ways pulls back his hoodie like "you need a spot son?".... my styles more flexible than yoga mixed with kama sutra... battle topical, text, audio, man whatever suits ya... Got Mic-elangelo's In-nate Hand-le when it comes to aesthetics.. to sleep on Wise bitches gotta be Under anesthetics... see the flex muscle made from scriptin text to vets... constantly constructin connects and answerin RB threats... illness flows through my blood i'm litterally reppin blood type.. since i bleed letters kids try to cut me up at that knife fight... spiritual spillin.. fuck it.. i'm sweaty.. tired of lyrical killin... wise script somethin..hit me up when record sales break a million They don't need a water break...fuck that...get back to ya shit.. Wise Ways: Frontiering thru tha jungle on a steady pace with a machette Ripping heavy..attacking and slashing tha fuck out of a yette Under & Wise playing hop scotch..from continent to continent Juggling tha atmosphere, moon & stars..without even dropping it Then doing push-ups with one Hand..only using two fingers Tha other hand..socking punching bags filled with beginners Meanwhile jogging up stairs at speeds that make light look slow Pierce ya brain with hurricains..knock tha wind out u in 1 blow Got more than 40 foot verticals..Wise can jump out of a crevace & then just jump right into quicksand..& then get out in seconds We taking leaps of faith..making it all around tha whole globe Like a ghost..running across tha sun's surface on my tippie toes Intergallactical prisions..twisting saliva vowels in to infinite bars Straight spitting shit hard on earth's clone..to create life on mars Crash landed.. playing leap frog with all nine of tha planets Gambeling with ya life..making cards explode like I was gambet Can catch me on jet clouds..I'll be busy practicing pull ups Let go of tha shit..sky diving down without getting a nose rush Eating so many emcees..to stay in shape..I'm always crunchin abs Pin weak ones on their thorax..& exercise on em doing jumping jacks Fucka Subway....Who needs it when you got Lyrical Fitness.....Part 2 coming soon |
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01-30-04, 12:02 PM | #2 | |||
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IP: 1481 46A3
uppin this shit man
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01-30-04, 01:59 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
nice collab... both came good with the topic,, and had some good metaphors.... Under, thought yu had a good use of vocab, and worded well, Wise, thought your flow was smooth...
...other than that, what can i say all aspects were decent.... i liked it.... the two verses went well together...... keep it up.... |
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01-30-04, 04:23 PM | #4 | |||
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IP: 1481 46A3
thank you
.............. There'll be a part 2 coming soon |
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01-30-04, 04:50 PM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 5502 12A2
ill wordplay wise ways....nice drop from the first kid....hot topic....waitin on part 2
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01-31-04, 02:53 AM | #6 | |||
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IP: 1481 46A3
up in this shizzy
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01-31-04, 11:05 PM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: C156 6FF0
surprise another open mic slept on word guys we would love some feedback .....the collab is decent.........let us know what you thought bout it.............
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01-31-04, 11:51 PM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: A2E6 CC04
dis was a nice collab...both obviously had flow...
both verses were nice...wordplay etc... favorite lines... "you see the veins in my head poppin out telekinetically trainin.. wise ways and Rated collabed now they open mic reignin.. I'm benchin vocab likes it nothing though i got a ton on.. wise ways pulls back his hoodie like "you need a spot son?"...." "Then doing push-ups with one Hand..only using two fingers Tha other hand..socking punching bags filled with beginners" nice... keep it up... |
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02-01-04, 04:53 AM | #9 | |||
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IP: 1481 46A3
^thank you ....appriciated
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02-01-04, 06:18 PM | #10 | |||
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IP: 1481 46A3
Feedback please
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02-01-04, 07:16 PM | #11 | ||||
So Tired Of It.
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IP: 4577 CD9A
dope....i like this shit..had me laughing and visualizin..go peep me and ace's collab
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02-02-04, 01:01 AM | #12 | |||
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IP: 1481 46A3
Thank you.....
anymore???? This a dope collab.. You must read it |
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02-02-04, 01:13 AM | #13 | |||||||
Suspended Suspense
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IP: EC0B 84C7
not bad, some original wordplay, very unoriginal name,(bitten from lost boys) underrated had good vocab, wordplay was original, though it seemed a bit weak to me. Your flow was decent, had a few good multis, but a bit more work could have gone into your transitions.
Wise Ways, your flow was nice, wordplay was also original, but also a bit weak, vocab was nice. some of the lines were kinda corny, like the" Wise can jump out of a crevice, into quicksand, and get out in seconds." that was weak, it seemed to me that you could have had some killer lines, but you would screw em up sayin shit like. "like a ghost, running across the suns surface on my tippie toes" the ghost thing just ruined that whole bar. but anyways, it was enjoyable enough to read, i actually finished it, so i guess i can't complain to much about it. Please don't take any of it to heart, just friendly criticism, no hate what so ever. 6/10, decent drop p.s. you should let me get in on part 2 though, sounds like a fun topic, i always love to brag about my skills, so hit me up.. |
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02-02-04, 04:59 AM | #14 | |||
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IP: 1481 46A3
Meh...I don't know about that...
Lyrical Fitness is Under and Mine... Maybe we can collab on something else though |
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02-02-04, 07:08 AM | #15 | ||||||
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IP: 1EC4 051A
man! this is hot shit dawg, im in the process of losin my first battle and i think i was sleepin on the talent! this is a collabo!!!
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