Yo...you almost done loading that bowl? Shit....too many herbs now a days...you know....Taking a while...Hold up

CarsonJetx2:

Shoe fly, that's right newbie, get off me...
Why the fuk ya'll want jet, Dont' ya'll like to breath?
It's a merkin guaranteed, I aint even want the victory...
So I say no, then ya'll call me scared...
can't u see my battle's?...or u visually impared?..
A pro in L distribution, 4 posts an u ask for execution..
Then whine, an say it's all my DR's..
As ur bein re-habbed thinkin u gon' merk jet's bar's
Wit personal's like "Ayo Jet's your a car"
Trust me it won't get u far..I've heard it all 100 times
The fuck...Me an wise are sicka waistin our lines

Wise Ways:

Yeah..I'm sick of mothafucka's biting rhymes from Nas...
Then typing shit in CAPS LOCK to get their points across..
Running outta ink..keep putting you on my list of whores..
Kid..I could type punches with pinkys harder than yours..
..Got you on all fours..begging for tha dick..you love it..
Ending careers..A loss from me..and they're like "fuck this"
Ansewering my callouts..setting tha plate for me to feast..
Fronting like you beasts..when yall got 10 losses a peice..
Spewing lies..like "Wise I'll Kill u"..fa real..you'll slaughter me?
Well I just got 5 words for yall..Shoe Fly..Don't Bother Me!

Fucking herbs over running this shit...fuck...get a life...or elevate kids...shit..get a clue....fucking herbs....

Why are you two always pickin on us ppl!

It's my nature.....

sorry Ace...I have offended ur nation.....j/k
U shoulda been on this one 2...

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Dont wanna free-post.....but OMG...
right after we posted this....how funny

^ ^ LoL, Just The Shit You Were Talking About. .

Carson, You Came Pretty Nice In This Shit, Flow Was A Little Off, But The Verse Was Funny, Not Much I Can Say. . Just Funny Shit. .

{Then whine, an say it's all my DR's..
As ur bein re-habbed thinkin u gon' merk jet's bar's
Wit personal's like "Ayo Jet's your a car"}
^ ^ If Somebody Actually Used That, Then I'll Laugh Some More. . . I Hate The Dickridin' Accusations From The Herbs Too. . They Come Here, Lose, Then Immediately Blame Dickridin'. . They Don't Even Question Their Skill.

Wise. . Shit Was Straight Humor Man, You Just Had The Flow To Go Along With It. . Feelin' Your Verse More Than Carson's Cause Yours Just Seemed To Have More "Umph" Behind It. .

{Yeah..I'm sick of mothafucka's biting rhymes from Nas...
Then typing shit in CAPS LOCK to get their points across..
Running outta ink..keep putting you on my list of whores..
Kid..I could type punches with pinkys harder than yours..}
^ ^ Str8 Rollin' After This Shit Cuz. . Them Fuckin Herbs Type In Caps To Try N Make They Punches Seem Better. . CAPS LOCK DON'T CHANGE GARBAGE. . Pinky Line Had Me Rollin' Too. .

Overall, This Was Good For What It Was. . Humor. . Nice Drop Fellas. Pz.

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^ ^ Hit It Up. . Appreciate iT.

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this was a tight drop i was def felling this
to me...it shoulda been in audio it woulda
been way better...other than that it was
tight...

favorite lines..

A pro in L distribution, 4 posts an u ask for execution..

Spewing lies..like "Wise I'll Kill u"..fa real..you'll slaughter me?
Well I just got 5 words for yall..Shoe Fly..Don't Bother Me!

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due to Formulas comment...

My part is now in audio
Shoe Fly

Nice Carson...

nice shit.....carson came nice but the flow was suspect, struct was fine...metas were nice.....wise came hot....dope ass lines....like Running outta ink..keep putting you on my list of whores..
Kid..I could type punches with pinkys harder than yours..
..Got you on all fours..begging for tha dick..you love it..
Ending careers..A loss from me..and they're like "fuck this"


nice drop fellas.....woulda like to see more tho......8-10

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its funny..

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^nice feedback...lol
I already knew it was funny

Liked it a lot guys. I agree with Technician in that I would of like to see longer verses. I know what yall talkin bout.
"Yeah..I'm sick of mothafucka's biting rhymes from Nas...
Then typing shit in CAPS LOCK to get their points across.."
Shit I feel that. And the weak ass punches. I like how you put personal experiences in it too. Good stuff guys

It wasn't my type of open mic. It was more like two diss/battle verses, minus the punches. It's just not my style, but whatever works for you. I was really fealing one line though.



^That is so fucking true. I hate that, and the dashes, quotation marks and bold lettering. Anyway, keep doing what you do.

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