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Keystyle - PLEASE GIVE SOME FEEDBACK!!
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Fuck amatuer rap, I'll stick an axe in ya back
grab a scalpel from the lab n cut ya atoms in half collapsin you flat... make me mad n get smashed bitch stomp you so bad ya stomach ends up where ya back is you'll be thinner than anorexics takin crack hits lace ya brain wit acids like u ate peyote cactus murk the name you rap wit, ya outta date wit tactics battlin me... is like tryna pierce a tank wit hatchets born in test tubes like orphans i was a failed abortion... in the womb i sat in a room wit a strait jacket made of organs wrap intestinal tubing around ya neck 'till ya blueing squeeze until everything goes black like the end of a movie it was hard but i managed, to find the titanic I died, ressurected as Moses n split the Atlantic i spit wit advantage, i was born wit ability n formed as an ill emcee to torment the industry i'm a force without sympathy, a man without pity spit winds high enough to disaster a city go to hollywood and find the actor theyre filming Rig a bomb to the frame so it collapses the building an assassin for killing, my silence is lethal you rappers cant see me like outside of peepholes im tired of people who try to be peaceful im the type of emcee who likes to be violent and evil i crush skulls, get hot enough to melt the north pole Intoxicated's spittin heat like i swallowed the sun whole Lucifer couldnt do that if he choked on hot coals After i burn out, i'll go to the after-life to hunt souls where i'll be fighting a hord of cults till my sword is dull barely escapin with my life through an opened portal hole return to the mortal world and continue my conquest To be the illest emcee in the world without contest To blaze mics throughout any region of the globe assaulting ya ears till there's blood leaking down ya lobes come up and put you in the sleeper while you choke it's death sneakin up on you, i'm the Reaper in a cloak Ummm that's all i'm gonna do for right now... tell me how it's going and take into consideration that this will be my first audio.... just a first draft, appreciate any feedback...
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