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Old 02-08-04, 08:58 AM   #1
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Time Flies By: Collab of Unknown Skillz and FiZicz

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This is a collabo by Unknown Skillz and FiZicz

FiZicz

First you born,then you live and then you end up in hell or heaven
damn,it's as if i left i my watch in first class on a 747
Cuz time is going so quickly,and it flies by
in a snap a nigga can die, in a driveby
and it feel like in thirty minutes it'll be next week
but some people ask fa there time to be over because
they talk shit to the point where somene get tired and make there chest leak
but you gotta live life one day at a time
and imma live life one day and wit mai rhymes
and time goes on it's not altered, continues without you
4,3,2,1 times out ooo



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Every day you wake up and time has passed,
You keep hoping that some day it will last,
Its go around the clock and going fast.



Unknown Skillz

From time to time it keeps flying by,
I know this world is moving on but why?,
Goes so fast that you dont have time to reply,
But you move on too, you sigh and lay down to look at da sky,
Im tryna make my time last for as long as it can,
It has been speeding up from when it first began,
This period of time has flown by this Age of Man,
The time keeps running and it ran and ran,
How did it ever move sof fast to not keep up,
To me time is more prescious then a Queen`s Cup,
Every day I try to rewind the time,
Time flying by is worst then organized crime,
Plz dont try any of the stuff above,
Cuz there arent worst things I could think of.



Chorus

Every day you wake up and time has passed,
You keep hoping that some day it will last,
Its go around the clock and going fast.
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Old 02-08-04, 09:03 AM   #2
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This was decent..a bit played out topice and wordplay was very simple..but..it still came out pretty decent..Unknown skillz you had a good structure and decent flow going..keep up the good work..^.^....~click on the sig...Lover's Thought...
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Old 02-08-04, 09:21 AM   #3
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This was ok. Some parts were a bit simple, but i guess it's just the styles. The content was ok, i guess. Could have been alot better. Overall it was a decent piece though. Keep droppin'.

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