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02-06-04, 10:37 PM | #1 | ||
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Just a Flow
IP:
My rap book is a holy grale,if you touch,it'll burn ya fingaz//
tossed a nigga in da lake a year ago and da smell still lingers// but i think that the cops are suspecting it's me, so dis is da reason why i spit// i rip niggaz out da game like justin ripping out janets tit// when i shoot a nigga, da blast is hot// I countdown to my killz like an astronaut // i'm like bart simpson,dese niggaz can bite me// and don't take me lightly,because when i come around i speak politely// i'm not actin nicely// |
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02-06-04, 11:34 PM | #2 | |
Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
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IP:
if this was just a flow...then it was
but it lacked in a few areas the flow was very not consistent... i just have a persona pet peeve with spelling.. but thats me the imagry, vocab, rhyme scheme and just about everything else lacked theres wasnt a consistent idea with this whole piece first bit of advice, make your lines about the same lenght peep this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...089#post1163089 |
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