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Old 02-07-04, 02:50 PM   #1
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sdizzle just released his first single called absolute fire

www.soundclick.com/sdizzlerecords

peep and tell me wut u think
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Old 02-07-04, 03:25 PM   #2
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dude..you need some serious help..this is what you dont have and need to get to become better..you need:

more energy in your voice..
to apply a character in your music..
a developed style..
more practice..
better production skills..

you just realy need to do alot more practice until you come back to this spectrum..

no diss..just truth..pZ..
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Old 02-07-04, 03:49 PM   #3
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my FIRST single, hoping to elevate
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Old 02-07-04, 04:00 PM   #4
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you have a long way to go friend..i understand its your first joint..but theres much you prolly should've accomplished before putting out your first joint man..i'm not being a dick..just saying..the world of them emcee is a brutally judgemental world..you prolly wont get the replies you're looking for until you at least display some sort of raw talent..

feel me?..

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Old 02-07-04, 06:01 PM   #5
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sdizzle just released his first single called absolute fire

www.soundclick.com/sdizzlerecords

peep and tell me wut u think


Are you speaking about yoruself in the third person? You realize you are on a NET rap baord right. You better be beyond ill comin in here tlakin in the thrid person.

Your crew name is R-O-C....do you live under a ROCK?....u do know what ROCAFELLA IS RIGHT....lmfao...*cliks hiFi*

OMFG AT THE BEAT!.....ha ha ha ha..fruity written all over it..HA HA HA at you whisperin..are you joking man?..this is horrible...the beat....the fact i cant HEAR you....the fact you are off beat...omfg

this goes under alltime worse tracks ive ever heard.

WOW

get help now

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any song i made with lyrics i didn't have a program to play the beat at the same time i recorded, so any song i made i spit acapella and tried to blend it into the best
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Old 02-07-04, 06:04 PM   #6
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Oh, that rocafella underground beat makes me want to poke my eye out.

.OnE.

Please elevate you and your crews game as soon as possible......
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any song i made with lyrics i didn't have a program to play the beat at the same time i recorded, so any song i made i spit acapella and tried to blend it into the best
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Old 02-07-04, 06:19 PM   #7
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listenin.. that bassline is annoyin... this need so much improvement.. flow was way off.. was ur mom in the room?? n u were scared to rap louder n with more emotion... cause u need that a lot.. whats up with the pause between verses.. lyrics needs to get better... delivery was offffffffffff.... u stop at the end... n started breathin into the mic...lol.. dont do that acapella shit...

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Old 02-07-04, 06:21 PM   #8
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http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=880581&q=Hi

^everyone click that its great...omfg^

"girls gone wild spring break boston!"

lmfao..thats all i hear....wow

this is great shit man..i LOVE your music

p.s. to all that say FUCK ME for being hard on thsi kid...he refered to himself in the third person. And READ his soundclick page.....dudes gotta be off his his ROCKER....ROCAFELLA?....not likely man

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Old 02-08-04, 08:35 AM   #9
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holy shit..

elevate, please.
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Old 02-08-04, 02:17 PM   #10
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i told you..
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Old 02-08-04, 06:27 PM   #11
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Old 02-10-04, 01:02 AM   #12
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Shit men you definetly more enthusiam in your voice......I don't know if you talkin or singin, I don't feel any emotion...your monotone, Also lower the sound of the beat cuz we can't hear ya.......GOD PUT THE MIC CLOSER
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