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02-04-04, 12:26 AM
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PuRe AzN..
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Miracle
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Miracle in the Making Im a miracle in the making Trust me.. Im not lyrically faking And Im juss Spiritualy Waiting But It's Killing me saying: When Will I Be Lyrically Gifted Spiritually Lifted Miracley Shifted I'm a Miracle.. A Miracle... In The Making I Picked Up A Mic Not To Long Ago I Was Diferent.. Not Bad Not Like Most Tho I Wrote With This.. Miracle Pen And I Wrote So Bad... I Thought I Was Lyrically Sinned But I Practiced Yet Practiced Harder Til I Was Mentally Bent I Learned The Hard Way Thru The Tears Like Kanye Thru The Wire, Yet Deeper Then Fear I Know The World Is Comming Closer To Peace But I Think Its Turning To Pieces.. Listen Please I Know I'm Just A Kid, But I Decide Tomorrow Do You Ignore To Listen.. Leave The Future In Sarrow Didn't Think So.. Yes My Words Leave You Speechless Wait Till I'm Older In My Prime On Top 10 B.E.T. Lists Im a miracle in the making Trust me.. Im not lyrically faking And Im juss Spiritualy Waiting But It's Killing me saying: When Will I Be Lyrically Gifted Spiritually Lifted Miracley Shifted I'm a Miracle.. A Miracle... In The Making
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02-04-04, 12:38 AM
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Banned: Spamming
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02-04-04, 12:40 AM
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Thanx for the feed back ... lol
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02-04-04, 12:46 AM
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Guest
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Wut Up
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02-04-04, 12:48 AM
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^^^^^^^^^^The Fuck???
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02-04-04, 07:19 PM
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PuRe AzN..
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UppIn....
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02-04-04, 08:35 PM
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PuRe AzN..
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feedback would b nice
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02-04-04, 09:45 PM
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PuRe AzN..
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y the fuck cant i get some feedback
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02-04-04, 10:38 PM
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PuRe AzN..
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^...
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02-04-04, 11:36 PM
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PuRe AzN..
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^^^
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02-05-04, 12:20 AM
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i hate you all....
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02-05-04, 12:30 AM
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PuRe AzN..
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I Fuckin HATE YOU
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02-05-04, 12:37 AM
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Yo my Asian bro lol. Nah anyway...good shit. Like the msg you were sending. YOu should try to up your vocab tho. Best line was: "I Learned The Hard Way Thru The Tears
Like Kanye Thru The Wire, Yet Deeper Then Fear" I also like the wordplay in the refrain. ~1~ |
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02-05-04, 12:39 AM
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PuRe AzN..
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holy shit..
thank you Mister Miagi lol Ur The First in Forever
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02-05-04, 08:57 AM
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I thought it PACKED a punch got it's point across, stuck with the topic
(killed the topic for a min) Dope structure, you could tell you had it laid out Dope concept multies and vocab were good but could be UPED!!! Try give other people honest opinions on their work, that's what I do even if they don't return the favor If noone's voting, criticizing, what's the point?? Overall it was DOPE Just ELEVATE ALWAYS JamesJr.
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