yo...
yo...
yo...

even if there's a billion children lookin for a reason...
to be caught in treason you would still have...
a million blood baths a day...
that's 12 deaths for every single breath that you take...
i know you hate to think that it's possible...
walkin in hospitals is an obstacle course...
that you need to navigate...
in order to reach tha sicker and tha quarantined...
tha horrer be tha fact that they get it...
from non other than tha gifted...
soon enuff to be forgettin whether or not...
you gave tha child tha shot...
that will cure all diseases...
because i believe it and need it to help...
all others except for myself...
puttin medical care as half-off prices on pharmicutical shelfs...
is wat i want to see...
death from a HIV is so nasty...
tha fact be that tha backseat rumor...
that tha goverment holds tha healing is true...
and they keepin it from me and you...
raise your voice til they hear you and fear too...

death is all that's left after sickness
wit no cures or no way to listen...
to old time medicine men who know
how to heal tha ones who r about to go...

so i saw in a dream a man...
who said that he had a plan that would save us...
and he gave up tha vision to me...
now i'm tha visionary...
such a phenominal judgement to do...
i'm handin it to actual doctors...
to save grandma and grandpa in their rockers...
but they lost tha priscription...
so now we have no way to know tha persicion...
of exactness for tha dosage...
handed it out anyway hopin no one would notice...
that was bogus cause we created genocide...
to me tha holder of meds is a hated enterprise...
of power and corruption...
they sold us to sicle cells and destruction...
life suction cups connected to tha earth...
we need more births...
so each elemental baby can join in tha research...
to save tha human race...
no matter how many eons that it takes...

death is all that's left after sickness
wit no cures or no way to listen...
to old time medicine men who know
how to heal tha ones who r about to go...

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thought it started off goood, nice flow and liked the way it was written,thought the end of the first verse dropped a bit...didnt seem to match the rest.... a nice hook... the second verse also started off good, but i felt it wasnt as good as the first, the content wise... but both had a decent flow... and went pretty good together,.... it kept me reading...so. yeah decent drop.........

I thought this was an ill drop. Your flow was nice, and you had an ill rhyme cheme. The content was pretty decent. Emotion was decent. this was an enjoyable read, and worth the time. I've read 5 OMs so far today, and this was the most enjoyable so faw. Keep up the good work.

Please drop feed here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112603

metaphysically uppin this through tha Internet...

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you seem to be a huge fan of sephiroth. lol. thats coo. ff7'z a great game. now. as
for the verse. it was nice. very enjoyable read. the meaning was at first difficult
to follow and find but in the end was found. that was good. the flow was nice as well
as the word choice. sum of the rhymes were a bit hard to distinguish but this was
still a good piece. good topic. keep at it man.

plz hit this up in return:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112457

pz

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