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02-08-04, 09:19 AM | #1 | |||||||
ThA BaDmAn Is HeRe NoW
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Take It
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02-08-04, 09:49 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: B81A 82F5
Beat is dope as hell... I like this Cassidy shit... Ya' flow, mic presence, voice, and quality is on point... Lyrics is coo'... Nuffin' special but they hot... You nice, boy boy... This other cat is corny... No hate or nuffin, but everything on his part was ass... Except his quality... Thats the only good thing on his part... Keep it up, kid... Stay Up...
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02-08-04, 08:53 PM | #3 | |||||||
ThA BaDmAn Is HeRe NoW
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IP: 4577 CD9A
ass? maybe u didnt get some of the shit i sed...
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02-08-04, 09:12 PM | #4 | ||||
Kung Fu
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IP: 3EBB BEAF
ok shotta, the first guy was good
but when it came to you........the song dove like a duck from the oldschool nintendo game duck hunt you have no feeling in your lyrics, your flow is off, delivery was weak.... but the other guy was cool |
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02-08-04, 09:16 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: B81A 82F5
First guy was good... Second guy was wack... Simple as that...
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02-09-04, 02:41 AM | #6 | ||||||
Light Weight
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IP: B4AC 694E
Iono who is first and who is second. So here goes.
First cat : Presence is felt. Simple lyrics, commercial style, but fits the beat obviosully. Once ya voice develops definitely got potential. Flow is straight, pretty easy to ride this beat. Nuthin to complain i mean, it was straight. Second cat : On beat..kinda...no mic presence though, sound like you straight readin off the page. After the first cat, your delivery and presence reminds me of bizare from d-12. How everyone comes in nice, then he comes in half tlakin, half asleep. nothing HORRIBLE here. Heard alot worse. Just work on the delivery. .OnE HuNeD'.
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Originally Posted by sdizzle any song i made with lyrics i didn't have a program to play the beat at the same time i recorded, so any song i made i spit acapella and tried to blend it into the best |
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02-09-04, 03:42 AM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: CF98 7E95
listenin... beat ill as phuck
style = nice.. hear this type of flow alot but shits koo... im feelin this track but wouldnt bump it on a daily but nice work main
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02-09-04, 03:23 PM | #8 | |||||||
ThA BaDmAn Is HeRe NoW
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IP: 7B82 FF66
yea good lookin on the constructive feedback
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02-09-04, 03:39 PM | #9 | |||||||
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IP: 2552 ABE8
wooooo, okay, this beat is fire. your levels is mega loud though, turn yourself down, word of advice, most songs have the beat at a higher level than the lyrics. but shit is hot, the first verse is all on point. the second one i dont know. overall, the piece is nice playa. keep at it.
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02-09-04, 08:48 PM | #10 | ||||||
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IP: D27D 0B18
beat is alright, delivery is not bad...flow is cool...turn down ur vocals a bit ...lyrics r tight...keep it up
return the favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...030#post1171030
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