ya ya I know no double posting lol what ever...Im on here at work in at midnight other then that, never I mean never on here. I have a life, and rhyming on stage is no where close to this...and this post is not meant at any one. youve been nice to me. I just hope most of you know this is not rap...or even hip hop...that a culture this is for a lack of a better word poety..
rant done

Swiftly spit bragatous rhyme scheme, mic fiends
New web Order, burning down the old regime,
No Style, don't even know what free means.
Poets spit rhymes like this was a coffee house
still doing they laundry with mammas's old blouse
rambling in gun stutter speak then talking thou god
Got you not only looking but sounding like Rod and Todd
Childish rhymes with unnecessary vocabulary
Still wondering if your going break your girls cherry,
judging other on there digal word play
so many unused "buts" it's smells like an astray
doesn't matter most wont touch a mic anyway
praising each other without uttering a word
forget the Neptune we listing to all the nerds
pushing their own verses like it was crack
bumping mobb deep in there two door hatchback
reading copycat lyrics I swear I was on ohhla.com
lying like the United States win in Vietnam
all driving CLK's. then working for minimum wage
hell most can't drive cause their not minimum age
I write so you all can feel me, realize I'm the Man
But that ludacris like Mos Def joining ku klux klan

That felt good lol just so u all know that was quick key or what ever but it did need a spell check lol

judging by the way your talking thru this,,, you should be able to spell... i would say this was pretty decent, but it seems like your a bit of a nob.... so i wont.... also alot of people on the site do audio... and have original material..... so wtf...

I know but im talkin to most and the nob thing, hmmm I was upset at most the newbies getting burnt on here. not me but others that's what upset me. some try to help other well u know...plus on it's called rap battles and to me most of this is not rap even wu wouldnt be so soo soo...i can think of the word i need sleep i work 2 much soo wHAt tHe FuCk do it up

man,, i cant understand half of what you said...lol....