10 lines

normal rules

you spit first

checkin in

we go at the same time

i'll drop as soon as you do man...................

ill go first cuz im the best and the number one
i will give you time for suicide ill even lend you my gun
i might just pop you myself with my big loaded nine
it will save you the trouble of thinking and taking yo time
your name edict has no meaning that is just pathetic
sombody pleas hurry up and get this guy a medic
the way you talk just gives me a really big headache
just dont try to write and get out of sight
just leav and go take a hike

and dont come back riding on a bike

thats the 10 line

You must be kidding me.. this kid doesn't know who I am
I'm repping the edict of dope.. while you're just repping a dead man
You suck.. give up.. you have no capabilities of winning
I'll take your breath away.. and your verse might have some living
Starting this was funny.. but ending this is just easy
Cuz, you couldn't enlarge your punches to capitols in D.C.
There's no doubt about it.. you're wack and it's been proven
You couldn't get votes if you put your back into it
And I'm not talking about a dance move.. But that goes without saying
Kid makes excuses..the winds blowin my way.. and you called it swaying

Freeposts cleared. Now no more freeposting.

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

Mak - played played played.. nothin new in there.. try thinkin some of ya own shit upp kid.. vocab is non-existant.. flow is also dry.. try writin a verse for ya opponent nxt time..

Edict - didnt need to drop so hard.. but props for doin so.. v.personal verse.. each line was hittin ya opponent.. nice mix of personals an metas.. nice witty concepts.. structure made for a smooth flow.. alot more consistant overall..

VoTe = Edict

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