direct quote from the original thread d-struct made...i fixed it caus ethe damn retard didnt make it a poll battle.....




Alright the top verse is mine the bottom verse is D-struct honest votes please......OMG this is funny


deacon's verse


I don’t have to come clever to rip this kid….
Cause look his sigs Koby Bryant line already did^^^^^lol…..
Check bitchslaped get a laugh at his so called accident
Claims he’s doper than a vet but he still w0nders whereall his talents at
Yeah see your soft like laxatation to your bowel movements
i suggest you take your shit back an start seekin major improvements
Yeah see I like pussy………… just not when it tries to push me
Wanna beat me?...write my name on your dick and light some inscents
its over….. cause dissin Deacons like dissin Christmas
A vet that every newby wishes for on his win list


d-structs verse
This bitch Deacon thinks he is a god.
If you see him in a commercial the girls say "i don't want your bod" (ill).
You say you'll never lose well it ends here.
Maybe you should go into retirement for 13 years.
Bitch you wanna fight me fight these tears.
When i said you was a noob man i guess i was right.
What ever you say is wrong, what ever i says right.
You call this a battle i call this crap.
You say your an mc but you can't even rap.

original deacon vs d-struct thread...just for proof and and what not

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113208

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ahaha i just realized his was 9 lines...hahaha whatever i'll let it slide....obviously

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lol one sided battled.

deacon: You ripped him lol, everything was better overall, you had the better punches, some made me laugh....better vocab....better structure...had the better flow to it as well i thought.

d-struct: you need to elevate....your punches didnt really do anything for you...work on your punches....flow was ok, but i thought deacons was better....try not to rhyme the same word like you did.

Overall this was pretty one sided...vote goes to deacon for the better overall verse.

LMFAO
this battle was utterly horrible !
wow.. funny shit

v/ deacon
had umm better punches.. at least i THINK he did
lmao.. naw, he did have better concepts n' punches n shit
didn't like the other dudes verse at all.. just was gay

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LMAO ! .. deacon took this hands down man .. D struct juss had some very weak and gay ass punches .. not even any good concepts damn .. deac had some aight lines .. a lot better than the other kids verse in every way ..

Vote - deacon

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deacon takes this easily he had structure and betta wordplay d-struct verse wasn't nice at all not countin' the 9 lines
but overall deacon was betta at punches and just came harder

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he who is elevated will experiance a great euphoria

deacon busted dis bitches ass like theres no tommorow

deacon shot this little bitch up
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DEACON had some better lines i just have too say
some of dstructs lines were alright but some really suked

deacon ur supposed 2 b in a respected crew but ur duckin a battle call out agaisnt me???y just go in elevated front lines and accept ma call out set it up and spit first nugga

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Alright Feeble im thinking this is something personal......respected head votes always should count......

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uppin

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votin for deacon, why?

flow: he had a betta flow with sum gud rhymes and wordplay, his voc. was gud; Dstruct didn't had a gud flow cuz his rhymes weren't gud at all, his voc. was Whack
punchlines: Deacon had just more and betta punches cuz they came hard and Dstruct also had punches but they din't work out, same for personals, you need to work on this Dstruct
multis/ deacon also had sum nice multis and Dstructs multis were played so.....
structure: They both had an ok structure

Vote Deacon
Plz hit back on this thx: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113596

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