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aight...
Yo check it, Ima set the tone right off the jump/ Spitt`n sum of the sickest shit ya heard for months/ Cuz whether it's off the dome or up in a battle/ I bring that "crazy beef" like "mad cattle"/ (mad cow) Malicous and outa control, but my niggaz still condone me/ Cuz off a lone beat I stay spit`n that dome heat/ Jersey native but I stay on the dark side like Hatians/ `N still pulln more bitches then "television double-O agents"/ (007) To anyone say`n they aint feeln my lyrical creations/ I say Ya'll fuckaz don't know shit like "eyewitness statements"/ Overly critical bitches, while ya raps are wack at best/ Claim`n to be vets when ya whole career takes place at ya desk/ I big-up my niggaz and say FUCK THE REST/ Please believe, when I beef, I beef in jest, to relieve sum stress/ In the street I'd just reach for the Wes and leave three in a chest/ ...honest feed-back welcome... Last edited by LUECYPHER : 01-23-04 at 11:10 PM. Reason: i felt like it... |
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hey man i got to admit u flip the skript on that right there major props
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Yea man, thats a nice little verse... Had good flow tha whole way through, and good punches/wordplay too...
Overly critical bitches, while ya raps are wack at best/ Claim`n to be vets when ya whole career takes place at ya desk/ ^^ Liked that line tha best.. - 1d |
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appreciate it... this is just basic shit though... anymore feed back?? I return the effort...
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IP: DD10 0DFF
Yeah this was alright here man.....you had some good flow in there, flowed pretty well i thought.....structure was alright, could be touched up a bit.....you had some alright vocab in there....had some good lines in it as well....keep at it.
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anymore feedback?
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