who in this world think they fuck with the odd/
ya'll dyslectic cause ya'll call me a dog i'm otherwise know as a god/
i penetrate the mind when i ventelate my rhymes/
and demostrate the divine lyrical power in my lines/
i'm both the hottest and coldest compare me to bengay/
or i could just put 23 shots to your chest and back like MJ/
i spit the hottest shit that any man could mannage/
and you can't OVER RUN my style until you actually UNDERSTAND IT/
damn it man don't make me have to kick you accross the planet/
i'll kick you while doin a hand stand while only one hand's planted/
and jump back with a second kick straight into your nose/
damage your throat beat you with you shoes and hang you with your clothes/
then unzip my pants and start pissin on your wounds/
and get even more vicious up under a full moon/
when i transform back into my original state/
a lyrical deamon who uses battles for bait/
and feast and rip the worst up to the fuckin realest/
shit i'll rip myself just to proove that i've even ripped the illest/
i be the new hip-hop inVADER i don't need to be DARTH/
i'm surgical like, i can see if you got heart/
so fuck wit me if you dare i'll even give you the chance/
but your shit'll be over with once i give you a glance/
cause you can run, rap, flow, rhyme as fast as you can/
but you can't catch me cause i'm the gingerbread man/
i'll hit you up or fill you up when my gun's drawn/
leavin mad bodies all over your front lawn/
and i don't do my dirty work i'll let my blade face you/
and i'm a lazy motha fucka i'll let my bullets chase you/
call my bluff check and see if i won't pull it/
just know that your chest is a good place to hide my bullets/
and a good place to hide ya body is under ya house/
then i'll sell all ya shit and rent the motha fucka out/
i'm a sick man with sick plans of total domination/
of all races from the whittess white boy down to the blackess haitian/
face it the shit is basic like finger paitin/
with color pencils and water color bases/
but it's good i'm still doin it i'm never gonna stop it/
i know ya'll wont reply and i know cause i'm the rapbattle prophet/
so here's the out look, ya'll just gonna keep sleepin and shit/
but see ya'll the dumb asses who still readin this shit/
but this will have to be my last bar for this thread/
cause i'm six feet from separtion and 2 minutes from gettin head/

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

Whats Odd Is That You Have The Word Ill In Your Name When Nothing About That Shit You Just Dropped Was Ill At All...

no bother even even respondin to ya ass cause it's obvious that you didn't read the shit, yo any more takas peep don't sleep

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

so here's the out look, ya'll just gonna keep sleepin and shit/
but see ya'll the dumb asses who still readin this shit/

Because of this line, I almost decided not to reply to this piece.

Anyway, you have some nice wordplay. You also had some weak/played wordplay. The flow was aight. The topic wasnt clear though. You should focus more on a specific topic next tim and cncentrate your energy. I see alot of potential, and the last line was hot. It was an ok piece. Keep writing.

Please drop feed on disappointment. The link is in my signature.

truthfully gun i usually tell stories and have a topic but right now i'm in iraq and this is just somethin to do with free time some no time to think of a topic or to stay on one but i see where you're commin from and that line was basically most cats on this site don't respond to shit

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

Hehehe i like the drop tell you the truth....dont listen to what others say about your shit.......keep doin your thing.......anyway back to the piece....you had good wordplay........flow was easy to go along with.......just try to concentrate on emotion.....i love emotional pieces thats why they call me what they do.........anyway dont let anyone bring you down.......keep it up!.....thanks for readin my piece an if you have a chance read this piece.........i talked about it in "Not Enogh To Be A Dope Emcee" its called "Influence" this was why i changed my style youll see why......

INFLUENCE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=93118

good lookin on the replies but i still need a little more quit sleepin ya'll

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

ok i'm seen a little patern here people on this site like to reply more to garbage shit than toill shit or to someone who has over a thousand posts ya'll need to quit bullshittin cause i've had 31 views and 6 replies fuck that sleepin bull shit

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

shit man, this site isnt for real rappers, its pretty much a joke, but i use it to see if people feel it, what i spit, thats it..... your shits sick keep spittin....

wake up wake up wake up ya'll need to quit sleepin, so get up get up get up and quit just peepin, god damn ya'll sleepin on real shit

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

there's only been one person to actually say somethin so shut the fuck up if you're not gonna read the shit and reply you numb fuck
next man

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

dun dun dun dun, dun dun dun dun duuuuuuuuuuuuun i'm back and see that ya'l lstill doin the bulshit games fuck ya'll and the peep show game

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

god damn ya'll motha fuckas know how to sleep on some shit all these views and no replies fuck ya'll

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun