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02-12-04, 08:20 PM | #1 | |||
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Word Perfect Collab-Meditation
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Subject: Meditation Koalatee-Lokinator-Maven As the leader saunters, teachers taunt her - ignoring the recipes That enhance, by chance, her mind-set with a form of complexity Admittedly, they say, they fear the thought of taking the risk(s) Unaware of potential accomplishments when minds escape to abyss Despotic thoughts while not at all fearing the scars of enigmas She produces illusions that rival the bizzarest of stigmas Is it a being we're seeing? One who makes the mind lax or calm inside Imagine attempting to depict the looks of a climax personified Admiring botches yet frowned on - forced into retiring modest It's sad when forms of comfort are shunned 'cos fame's requiring logic A dutiful answer to stress. . Best for folks depressed with the seasons Like a Made-for-TV offer, it provides the best in appeasement When minds wander & finds ponder on funds of crooked welfare Makeshift thinkers step aside - the naturals were lookin' elsewhere $99 airfare! Bring the family. . . Come try compiling the taut & regain youth in five nights @ the luxorious Island of Thought Sycamore trees; sugar coated with an icing of vanilla beads Supplemented with strawberry scented pine, catering for my needs, Is all I see. My centre is personal to me. Here, I am enlightened With intimate strength intensified- vitalized cause iron is heightened. a pilgrimage seeking mind, body and soul for fulfilment’s behalf; Discharge of radiance shines on spiritual encounters I face on my path. To grow more conscious- unfolding our inner love, life and wisdom, Being more aware of the guidance signs and how much we miss them. Thru` emotional cleansing and balancing I develop an intuition- Whereby my meditation makes my soul sensationalize in apparition, Knowledge is mind’s nutrition but the idea of insight has been deluded By magazines and television; who believe wealth, like love, is included. We observe but are alluded. True ascension comes only thin and few But yet people want to hear “what the planetary movement means to you!” my iris focuses, as my eyelids shut firmly over it on spoken tips, revealing thoughts flowering like lotuses we spoke of it, and showed that the world was completely ready for a lightning strike of purple prose, bearing me, unsteady it's ahead of me, in the distance, I can't find the light that sends it's photons to blind me, cutting through the night and it gets brighter, but my eyes shut tighter by the second teaching myself a lesson, reversing my own health in question and I seek it still, the will to live heightens my sense my walking stick is wisdom, but the weight I carry is immense I lost my common cents, handed them to the begging man who taught me to laugh again, who taught me how to plan for the disaster that would happen if the speech was too unclear it's difficult to acheive nirvana from this media overseer RIP Word Perfect.
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02-12-04, 08:24 PM | #2 | ||||||
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This could of been RB legends,
but it wasnt.
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02-12-04, 11:02 PM | #3 | |||
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up.
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02-12-04, 11:16 PM | #4 | |||||||
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this was incredible.
The concept, I mean the whole fucking thing was like wooah you people are some great writers.. Ill be sure to look for more WordPerfect collabo's, or single works by each of u. Props to all on this, this was fantastic, couldn't find one thing wrong.
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02-13-04, 09:11 AM | #5 | ||||||||
peace
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i was unaware this was posted. nice work lads
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wp died dood. |
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02-13-04, 09:30 AM | #6 | |||||||
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you should retire man. How the hell are you gonna get better than that.I mean I wanna bite that shit honestly
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02-13-04, 09:31 AM | #7 | |||||||
peace
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^lmao
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02-13-04, 11:27 AM | #8 | |||||||
See ya.
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el em ay oh. What the hell, Lok - why you bailing on W4W?
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Kevin - Patrick - Alex - John - Ian . . the artists formerly known as Word Perfect . . Still > you. R h y m e | V a n t a g e |
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02-13-04, 11:31 AM | #9 | |||||||
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blah sorry to do this, but can yall return the favor on my piece "Undefied Matter"
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02-13-04, 12:29 PM | #10 | ||||||
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i have to say
i was a bit dissapointed with this i'll compare it to a blockbuster..you go and see full of expectation and yes it was good..but not fulfilling mavens was the one which caught my imagination the most for sure. really good imagery and word usage koalatee and loki...expected a bit better to be honest just didnt really capture me with your pieces appreciate the vocabulary used but it seemed to detract in a way.. still better than average it seemed you exchanged some heart and emotion and imagery for intelligent writing pax |
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02-13-04, 08:57 PM | #11 | |||
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..said you deserve a break today!
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02-14-04, 06:12 AM | #12 | ||||||||
peace
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thanks for the feedback y`all
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wordperfect has become more of a brand name then anything more, it seems IMO and i`d prefer to just collab with yoo all instead of being under the tribulations that a crew brings. =/ |
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02-14-04, 10:32 AM | #13 | ||||
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Maven and Koalatee..two of the brightest writers on this site..LOki..from the Two pieces I've read from Loki,I was very impreesed..this was simply a great work of art..*Stamps* Legendary...
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02-14-04, 10:48 AM | #14 | ||||||
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Nice piece...
Topic was excellent... Wish id of thought of this topic... Damnit... Good imagery... Vocabulary... Wordplay... Multi's and Inner Multi's from all... Overall a very good drop... Very long... But it is 3 people... So youve got to expect that... Keep em coming... Pz... |
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02-14-04, 10:50 PM | #15 | |||
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weeeeeeeeeee
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