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Old 02-12-04, 01:28 PM   #1
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Muskateers - Intro

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Intro...


Lyrical MC
Me vs you theres only one conclude,i verbaly vapourise u into thin air,
dont compare,the lyrics i despatch wid any MC,coz like fosils my rhymes are rare,
lyrical host da 12inch blade,blood speeing from the wound ur beingin 2 fade,
like a army rade, my verbs will perade and concer victoriusly,
but my rhymes are matoriously know to outmenover any MC,but literaly ur verses kick up a lot of humour,wid a combination of vouls and verbs my verses is like a brain tumour,
u punch weeker than a gang leader with leperacy,this aint no democracy,u aint blind to see, the out come of battling me.....

Rappin' Master
People say that they can see through me like a new window,
But everytime I see sum1 im treated like I created da eminem show,
Unlike peter andre I'm not going insania,
The whole country will be reading my shit and goin mania,
You have nothing there, You're a blank CD waiting to be written on,
Even if you had help from Eminem, watever y do wood be classed as wrong,
You're as popular as Micheal jackson in a childrens nursery,
And you bout to be cremated at your mumma's anniversery,
even if you had 6 tins of tuna you couldn't get a whiff of pussy,
Your as hard as a young babys erection, In reality your a wossy

Potent
You Can't Hold It Down, Like Rick Wallers Clothes Stuck On A Tent Pole
Next Embold The Clown, Make The Flow Cold To Expose Their Red Nose
Potent Rose Too Sound, You Would Think That I'm A Florist Who Rhyme
Claiming Unstated Fact, Flow Compile Longer Than Nile To List Use Mine
Straining Outdated Rap, Just Like You Think About Your Past Romances
Shame To Rape An Act, But Fakes Shake Like Women Gyrate A Glances
Po' Prove Pier Pressure, Mess Turns Loosers Scare Western Super-Mare
You Geeks Fear Leisure, Like Contact.. So Thats Why You Wear Glasses
Depleits Sheer Pleasure, We Make Your Music Look Shook Like Percusion
You Cant Go To Sleep, Flow Beats And Then We Give You All Concusion

Musk-A-Tear Like Potent Smells Makes You Cry!!
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Old 02-12-04, 01:33 PM   #2
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^^Pot, outshone all 3 .. here, writers voice stood out, vocab was dope, & flowed solidly, .. other cats had some nice lines, didnt feel it that much tho..but this was not bad to read, .. keep writing, .. =) good job potent .. Uppppr.
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Old 02-12-04, 01:49 PM   #3
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1st guy: Not bad, sum nice vocab and multis in there....flow was kool but lines were stretched but yeah...dat was nice...

rappin master: didnt really like ya verse...some lines were aight but they came weak....flow was nice...i liked ya last line....props for that....aight verse but jus elevatin ya writin'

Pot1ent - nice verse.....1st line was really dope....rick wallers clothes....pmsl...nice werdplay...flow was nice.....gd vocab....ya verse was nice with sum gd lyrics....stay up

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Old 02-12-04, 01:54 PM   #4
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^Did you read?...& try to spell plz.

Potent had the multis, inners & the flow.. content/vocab..
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Old 02-12-04, 03:08 PM   #5
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^^stfu.....
u only sed that cos pot1ent holla'd at u on msn......
ur first post didnt quite state tha multis....

and i did read it and he did hav multis...
i apologise pot1ent for not stating that u had multis...

Pot1ent had tha dopest multis i have ever seen
there...happy now?
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Old 02-12-04, 03:20 PM   #6
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^^^^^^cheers for da opinions peeps....uppin for feed back........^^^
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