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02-12-04, 05:25 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Azn Pride Part 2: Collab
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Collab of ~Deluxe-Edition~, TiLLEyEDiE, and Lyric: Azn Pride Part 2
TiLLEyEDiE Jap Muh-Fucka and Yall I Don Like Ima Eat These Hatas Up Yep Juss Like Rice I Get More Dough Than Pillsbarry.. Still Get More Hoes So Ima Take Over America Like General Tojo Im A Genius To Go From Nationalism To Imperial hoe I Got More Bitches Then Ya Social Cerial Code You Cant Get One Shit I Got Way More Hoes Even In Japan I Can Get Girls To Drop They Kimonos Fuck ..Pearly I Run Thru Torii Gates I Juss Bought Four Damn Houses... ............ What Do I Do Wit More Estates? So If Ya Think Ya Can Step Up Bitch Ya Better Be A Samurai Cuz Bitch Asians Got Heart Plus Its A Good Day To Die Lyric Disrespectin always testin cause of the color of my skin Never bother ta look at the will and skill I hold within On a site dominated by mostly blacks and whites We're the minority...have to work to get our fights But I wouldn't change myself for anything ever Proud of who I am...heritage can never be severed Fucka race jus look at my battle record G Roll with da best...IJL...the dopest lyrically But I stay conscience of my roots, know where I'm from A Korean-American on RB whos second to fuckin none Don't lie bout my race...dun accept it then fuck you Asian Pride Till Eye Die...now whatchya gonna do? ~Deluxe-Edition~ Yup this is us again reppin Azn Pride all the way, We leading this whole damn world and thats how it gonna stay, LETS GO!!!!!!!!! Nope, we cant be stopped,cant be dropped,cant be topped, We the leaders on the streets and in the Dojos, Just cuz we Azn doesnt mean we cant flow though, Dynastys from China have been running since a long time ago, When I fight for my pride I kill more people then the Chinese Opium War, Im a black belt, I can pull out my nunchucks and make you fall to da floor, In my wars I will keep it PG and take out all the blood and gore, From Japanese,Chinese,Indian,Korean, we all have skillz you cant ignore, People will take my orders cuz Im more powerful then Lord Buddha, I eat up emcees in my way just like the China Sea barricuda, We gonna keep going on and on and on and on and on..................
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02-12-04, 05:40 PM | #2 | |||||||
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Now this Collabo was NNNNNNNIIIIIIIIIICCCCCCCCEEEEEEEEEE... LOL
HAD ME ON THAT... Macho Man Randy Savage beat ...lol.. i was feelin it... all three camn nice.... killed it... TillEyeDie "Get More Dough Than Pillsbarry.. Still Get More Hoes So Ima Take Over America Like General Tojo Im A Genius To Go From Nationalism To Imperial hoe I Got More Bitches Then Ya Social Cerial Code" Nice! lmfao...^^^ Lryic "Fucka race jus look at my battle record G Roll with da best...IJL...the dopest lyrically But I stay conscience of my roots, know where I'm from A Korean-American on RB whos second to fuckin none Don't lie bout my race...dun accept it then fuck you Asian Pride Till Eye Die...now whatchya gonna do?" yeah yeahyeah... niceness... liked this whole part ~Deluxe~ this is us again reppin Azn Pride all the way, We leading this whole damn world and thats how it gonna stay, LETS GO!!!!!!!!! Nope, we cant be stopped,cant be dropped,cant be topped, We the leaders on the streets and in the Dojos, Just cuz we Azn doesnt mean we cant flow though, Dynastys from China have been running since a long time ago, When I fight for my pride I kill more people then the Chinese Opium War, Im a black belt, I can pull out my nunchucks and make you fall to da floor, In my wars I will keep it PG and take out all the blood and gore, From Japanese,Chinese,Indian,Korean, we all have skillz you cant ignore, People will take my orders cuz Im more powerful then Lord Buddha, I eat up emcees in my way just like the China Sea barricuda, We gonna keep going on and on and on and on and on.................. Whole fucking verse was nice... killed it dunny... YEP! Caesar - On3 *Oh Yeah ... Check Out my illest piece... H.E.l.l. YEP...
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02-13-04, 11:40 PM | #3 | ||||
PuRe AzN..
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up it
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02-14-04, 09:11 AM | #4 | ||||
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o man ill ass collab....but yo next time u ppl have to holler at me first....wat else is there to say besides a nice ass colab?????lol yo check out mah colab with krogenix entilled Was That Your Aim? holla
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02-14-04, 11:11 AM | #5 | ||||
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this was good..nice "asian" collab..thats a new one..had some tight lines..had some weak likes..I will give this shit a 6/10..need to work on content..and prolly structure..but..it was decent..so I cant really complain..
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02-14-04, 07:17 PM | #6 | ||||
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Yeah this was alright here i thought....All three verses seemed pretty good, like Kryo said some good and some weak lines, but overall it was alright.....structure could be fixed up a bit but it was ok....The flow in this was alright, it stayed on point...keep at it.
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02-14-04, 08:49 PM | #7 | ||||
Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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thanks all...up
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02-15-04, 01:31 AM | #8 | ||||||
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nice work guys. I respect this piece of work. The first 2 verses were ill, the third one started a bit week but cought up well. Always have respect for posts like this. Peace!
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02-15-04, 02:39 AM | #9 | ||||
Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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thanks...up
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02-15-04, 03:03 AM | #10 | ||
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eh...now...i didnt really like this...
tilleyedie-your part was weak...the only good part was the end...the rest was blah...wordplay was weak.. content was weak..a bit more creativity is what u need.. lyric-i like urs up until u got to your record .... it started off with nice content....but then u went off on some weak type of stuff... deluxe-your verse was weak also..only part i liked was the fact that u used nunchucks..lmao...that was some funny shit...the rest bored me... overall-coulda been much much much better collab... but the content was really weak..so i've come to the conclusion that mexicans are better than asians...lol nah...but go peep my oopen mic in the sig...late |
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02-15-04, 03:23 AM | #11 | |||||||
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i thought this was pretty good i really like that line "we gotta work to get our fights" ya'll keep doin ya'll thing and race in rap is no longer a problem that's the only thing i have to say about the purpose of the thread, nobody cares about what race you are just as long as you got skill so like i said keep doin ya thing
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02-16-04, 03:23 PM | #12 | ||||
Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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thanks...up...leave links
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02-16-04, 03:30 PM | #13 | ||||
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I like it..I thought this was coo~nothing really outstanding but...I thought every one rep their nation pretty well..nice work! ~click~Click~sig~~
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