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Old 02-13-04, 09:10 AM   #1
Cykotic
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Lost and Alone

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I sit here all alone, Watching tears flow by
I cannot sit and think, I just want to die.
I cannot wait for death, to take me by the hand
It's like I'm flying high, I don't want to land.

I've seen the pain and loss, Of a million souls
Watching them all cry, never reached their goals.
I never thought to say, what I had to say
I'm dying in the night, I'll never see the Day.

I'll Say I'm sorry now, To the People that I know
I've said some bad shit, This I now do know.
How can I go on living, When I've had so much pain
i've got to do this now, Won't get the chance again.

As the blood flows freely, I'm starting to see the light
No more pain, anguish, fear, I don't have to fight.
I've now said my peace, I'm about to go
I'll miss you all dearly, More than you'll ever know...
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Old 02-15-04, 08:52 PM   #2
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this is a cool piece...seemed like there shoulda been at least one mo stanza to kinda add that last bitta pow...

this piece held its own...deep ness....emotions...imagry...

i esp liked:

I'll Say I'm sorry now, To the People that I know
I've said some bad shit, This I now do know.


the whole flow seemed to really wave an it was nice
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