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Old 10-03-04, 02:23 AM   #1
MissyAfeni
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This chick is the baddest, repurcussions is tragic, shittin on bastards,
blowin out skulls to make brains move faster,fu*kin w/a master,
I can't stand ni**as that act like bitches, and I don't fu*k w/cowards,
who know 4 bein' snitches, don't test me playa,
I don't bark, but my bite is viscious,
I can't stand bitches that act like ni**as,
sippin on nyak got em thinkin they got balls,
and puffed in the chest, you can't play me,
I'll snap on you quick like a dog with rabies,
this ish is gettin crazy,smoke til eyes lazy,
ni**as grab you di*ks, and ladies grab yo babies,
bite my tongue for no one, son,
I'm pullin ni**as card, tryin 2 act hard,
will only get you plucked out like chickens and strings on giutars.
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Old 10-03-04, 02:30 AM   #2
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let me just say that needs work badly yer stucure was bad and where was yer vocabulary
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Old 10-04-04, 02:34 PM   #3
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wow imma have to agree w/ Also...damn girl i mean it looks like u got MAD talent but on dis one u need to work on da structure n mostly da Vocab..keep it up
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Old 10-05-04, 11:05 PM   #4
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Man of corruption with no plan of construction two books written
But shook like kittens along the same line I aim rhymes forbidden
To cats, become an attacker not some actor with a part in a play
My heart sway violent and silent
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Old 10-05-04, 11:30 PM   #5
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yo gurl i have to say u have mad potential and keep postin n listen to ppl cus were here to help u out, yea work on ur struc and vocab also maybe some wordplay and i swear i heard that dog line used before buti could be wrong so try not to use similiar lines but any way keep postin gurl, hit my open mic up "cruelty" iite -1-
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