same rules asper
15 lines max
10 lines min
good luck dun

Shit, my rhyme’s will make your vision blurred~in~red, but yours is so much like…the “first word~I~said“,
Like I said I’ma kill you get yo’ blood and spill~it, but your hits are like the oxygen I breath, I can’t feel~it,
All that verse deserves is fifty~yawns, but mine’ll make you feel like you fell off, but you were never really~on,
When I beat him, he’ll go into an audio~rage, cuz i’ma leave you wit less "options" than your audio~page,
When you battle me dog it feels like your livin~in~hell, cuz I’ll leave your “dome ringing” like the liberty~bell,
this cats “garbage” but his shit ain’t fit for real~bins, I’ll eat you up dog, my dinners served, this meals~in,
the way I write these rhymes you would think I steal~grins, I’m like the grim reaper the way I deal~sins,
he says all of his “intelligence” is made “artificially“, and its all stored in his mind…………..just not officially
He’s gon’ be so sad he’ll “throw himself away” like old photos, “put it in my album” dog you winnin is like tryna find a straight homo

can i check for ideas in my book? or would that be prewritten, but theres no words....its just like words that give me ideas....peace....

no hate, or im not doubting but is urs prewritten? there's no personals....

hiz style and elevation keepz varryin in every battle(soundz bittin or pre written to me)

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pre written not a chance sun ................................................

can u answer my question though.............................

wtf.....keystyle here i go................................................ .......give me 30 to 40 minutes.

You aren’t “murdering” emcees you should be ashamed-to-say-ya-name//
I cut you up 4 times like Schick razor-blades, verses tighter than when braids-are-made//
I state-the-shame that this battle is like prison abuse cause Imo reveal-the-truth//
This dude went from sounding hot to whack, what’s wrong with you?
(http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123732)

Your “flows” went down more than Niagara Falls//
You came "soft all of a sudden" like your Viagra-stopped//
Man, you like a undercover cop on his first day cause you blown-ya-cover//
Expose-to-others that you a mosquito emcee, the way you bite//
Fight with Mike, but our role’s reversed… you copy and pasted, and plus yo's rehearsed

Get it through your head, not even Restricted could spit a verse like that in ten-minutes
You need to grow up like a “tree”, so in your raps, I stick my Timbs-in-it

Shit, my rhyme’s will make your vision blurred~in~red, but yours is so much like…the “first word~I~said“, ok opener
Like I said I’ma kill you get yo’ blood and spill~it, but your hits are like the oxygen I breath, I can’t feel~it, WEak
All that verse deserves is fifty~yawns, but mine’ll make you feel like you fell off, but you were never really~on, Ok punch
When I beat him, he’ll go into an audio~rage, cuz i’ma leave you wit less "options" than your audio~page, FILLLER
When you battle me dog it feels like your livin~in~hell, cuz I’ll leave your “dome ringing” like the liberty~bell, That makes no sense
this cats “garbage” but his shit ain’t fit for real~bins, I’ll eat you up dog, my dinners served, this meals~in, WEAK
the way I write these rhymes you would think I steal~grins, I’m like the grim reaper the way I deal~sins, aiight its aiight
he says all of his “intelligence” is made “artificially“, and its all stored in his mind…………..just not officially I'm so sick of Weak assed punches
He’s gon’ be so sad he’ll “throw himself away” like old photos, “put it in my album” dog you winnin is like tryna find a straight homoBAD CLOSER


You aren’t “murdering” emcees you should be ashamed-to-say-ya-name//
I cut you up 4 times like Schick razor-blades, verses tighter than when braids-are-made//MEdiocre opener
I state-the-shame that this battle is like prison abuse cause Imo reveal-the-truth//
This dude went from sounding hot to whack, what’s wrong with you?
Good point nice punch
Your “flows” went down more than Niagara Falls//
You came "soft all of a sudden" like your Viagra-stopped//Good punch
Man, you like a undercover cop on his first day cause you blown-ya-cover//
Expose-to-others that you a mosquito emcee, the way you bite//The flow got fucked up here
Fight with Mike, but our role’s reversed… you copy and pasted, and plus yo's rehearsedgood punch
Get it through your head, not even Restricted could spit a verse like that in ten-minutes
You need to grow up like a “tree”, so in your raps, I stick my Timbs-in-itWeak Closer

Tha lowdown
MC MUrder-6/10
Mike 12Ikeda-6.5/10

Peace and Props

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I've Been Gone Longer Than You Been Writing

haha wow

mc.............ive seen your shit before.....dont know if it was you or somewun else but its all good..............structure was fucked along with your flow................no personals and your punches lacked hittin power..............elevate

mike..........your verse was okay you could use some elevation though................your sturcutre was better...........flow was okay and it was on point...............punches was good and your personals wa on point......keep it up and keep elevating

jus a lil tip if your gunna use links in your battle as personals......do this



it will look like this

[url=http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123732]dude went from hot to wack

opps vote mike.....and looks like this***

dude went from hot to wack

yo decent battle both of you. both could elevate a lil more but heres the breakdown.
mc murder
best lines-All that verse deserves is fifty~yawns, but mine’ll make you feel like you fell off, but you were never really~on
worst lines-When you battle me dog it feels like your livin~in~hell, cuz I’ll leave your “dome ringing” like the liberty~bell

mike
best lines-Fight with Mike, but our role’s reversed… you copy and pasted, and plus yo's rehearsed
worst lines-Man, you like a undercover cop on his first day cause you blown-ya-cover//
Expose-to-others that you a mosquito emcee, the way you bite

my vote goes to mike for better flow and deff. better punches

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weak battle from both y'all
Murder....thatwas really wack, no punches, no personals, no wordplay, no multies, no vocab, no metas, nothing worth mentioning, its not hate just truth like the commercial

Mike...weak drop, but you had a few personals which won battle for you, but it was still wack man, punches were weak but at least you had some so another plus for you, you were lacking in everything else, nothing that I really enjoyed from either one of you, but keep elevating
Vote: Mike

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