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02-18-04, 12:34 AM | #1 | ||||||
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KeMy$try 101
IP: 60E9 BAEF
Hey yo I havent been here in a long ass time but I'm back and this is what I got to say so here we go
When I start my lyrical attack, it's all in fun But if you test my patients long, ur life is done Ive begun, in my sleep and progressed in dreams And I tear apart your hopes wit a lyrical scream Its the dream team, that searchin for me And when I spit my flow, its straight make believe U concieve thoughts, from an incredible thing Then my words hit ur head with a prolific sting Its a song sung, wit a masterful beat Ur waitin for my song tah beam down on ur street But it cant, until my deals signed U'll know my names K, from my damagin mind I'm a genius with rhymes, bring reprocutions with nines Roll down the streets just increasin my fines Now a split second, for u tah regain ur face But if ur up against me, the best is second place Because u can't replace, and my style ya chase And if u gonna challenge me, its my time ya waste So dont waste my time, cuz I'm ready tah shine Spit like a watch, it's time afta time Speak out with anger cuz im runnin with greed Produce all my words wit an incredible speed Let loose with my tongue like Roy Jones wit his hands I just keep on swingin and I'm waitin tah land Waitin tah span the globe with the illness I speak The Kemy$t is comin, wit my flow thats unique Wit all the talent they seek, they got no farther tah go Multi-platinum deals from a Kemy$try show People's jaws hit the floor when I'm vulgor and shout More saliva spills my mouth then a water and spout Leave um in doubt when vibrations escape my lips People dont wanna die so they skip my rips Cuz, I kill um in style and destroy um in flow Gonna release this verse and just let this shit go Thats it tell me what u think cuz this shit is madness. Peace. -KeMy$t |
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02-18-04, 01:05 AM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: EC0B 84C7
Im going to be as honest as possible for you...and I hope you will return the favor by hittin up one of the links in my signature...preferably a battle.....but any way this is my opinion.......this verse was just okay....It doesnt seem like you writting with the best of your ability...when i read this it felt like alot of it was just thrown together just to rhyme with the last line...like....."Spit like a watch, it's time afta time"...you gotta come iller than that dawg.....i think this was your best line though...."Produce all my words wit an incredible speed"...but forreal thats not saying a whole lot to be honest because i've heard lines like that before....but it seems like you have an above average vocabulary...so use that strength..but dont use it in a the wrong way "Then my words hit ur head with a prolific sting"....i'll peep your next open mic though......im out...
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