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Intoxicated 3 100.00%
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Old 02-08-04, 12:48 AM   #1
Intoxicated
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Intox vs John

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10 lines max
no d/r or hate votes
John spits first


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Old 02-08-04, 01:04 AM   #2
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intoxicated..... right


speak only when spoken to i didn't agree to batter you/
i mean battle you and shatter your brain while it's swellin from INTOXICATING MATTER TO/2
yo on this site like every CHUMP they should ban u/
but after you read 1 line u'd be my biggest fan 2 /4
fag... i make this into a fist fight for all as a spectacle/
that way they can see JOHN beat in this HETEROSEXUAL/6
my rhymes are more deadlier than the next spittin venom to intoxes neck/
then kill him in a brutal lashing for everyone to make things correct/8
my shockingly refreshing lyrical quenches beat even the most of such sinches/
turn men into vagina's and make them all bitches/10
the most wanted sheet has surprisingly took off a name for it's list/
cuz' intox won't battle now Y.. i think he slit his wrist/

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Old 02-08-04, 01:26 AM   #3
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intox i'll vote afta ya spit but first vote at ME VS John
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Old 02-08-04, 03:43 AM   #4
Intoxicated
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check his profile......
Not trying here.....


Tox got a sick mind, wit rhymes that leave lips fried
I see you're still elevating... gettin stuck on the Hillside
didnt agree to battle?? you said you'd flow if i set it
I'll smash ya face in the ground until ya nose is embedded
i spit sulfaric acid that go right through you like ghosts
Everybody laughs at ya wack shit like that dude in ya post
Ya unreal... wack n lackin skill... im phat n ill
ya squads wack...the Jaguars only pro team in Jacksonville
relax n chill... dont be stressin cuz you cant rap at all
You need to put the mic down n stick to playin basketball


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Anyone who votes can drop a link and I'll reply...
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Old 02-08-04, 03:28 PM   #5
Intoxicated
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Uppin #1.......... Drop a link and ill return the favor.,,,,
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Old 02-08-04, 08:27 PM   #6
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Uppin #2....... Comon guys, vote and i will vote/respond to whatever link you drop...

pz
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Old 02-08-04, 09:55 PM   #7
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intoxicated..... right

speak only when spoken to i didn't agree to batter you/
i mean battle you and shatter your brain while it's swellin from INTOXICATING MATTER TO/2
Pretty nice...

yo on this site like every CHUMP they should ban u/
but after you read 1 line u'd be my biggest fan 2 /4
Blah,,fell off

fag... i make this into a fist fight for all as a spectacle/
that way they can see JOHN beat in this HETEROSEXUAL/6
So and so

my rhymes are more deadlier than the next spittin venom to intoxes neck/
then kill him in a brutal lashing for everyone to make things correct/8
Nice.. jus aint say much

my shockingly refreshing lyrical quenches beat even the most of such sinches/
turn men into vagina's and make them all bitches/10
Blah

the most wanted sheet has surprisingly took off a name for it's list/
cuz' intox won't battle now Y.. i think he slit his wrist/
Blah


check his profile......
Not trying here.....


Tox got a sick mind, wit rhymes that leave lips fried
I see you're still elevating... gettin stuck on the Hillside
Hah... downgraded

didnt agree to battle?? you said you'd flow if i set it
I'll smash ya face in the ground until ya nose is embedded
Nice

i spit sulfaric acid that go right through you like ghosts
Everybody laughs at ya wack shit like that dude in ya post
DAMN

Ya unreal... wack n lackin skill... im phat n ill
ya squads wack...the Jaguars only pro team in Jacksonville
Hmmm

relax n chill... dont be stressin cuz you cant rap at all
You need to put the mic down n stick to playin basketball
Weak ender,, but i see y

Tox- had punches, personal,multi,meta,creativity,flow, and overall
Tie- opener, ender [neither that strong]
John- basic as his name is... he gets the hunger category
Vote...TOX

I jus broke this down...don't tell me its a post requirement..Holla @ MEh
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Old 02-09-04, 12:03 AM   #8
Intoxicated
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Trejon, u didnt read his profile did you?? thats ok, thanks for voting and youre vote wont count until you have 100 posts no matter what... it sucks but get 100 posts and it's worth it.....

Uppin for votes...#3.....
READ HIS PROFILE TO UNDERSTAND THE PERSONALS
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Old 02-10-04, 01:05 AM   #9
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Uppin for votes...#3.....
READ HIS PROFILE TO UNDERSTAND THE PERSONALS

Drop a link and ill peep it
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Old 02-10-04, 06:55 PM   #10
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HAH ..i read it

i get it now

Fuck .. i gotta get 100 posts... to prove what... i got prestige cuz i can post in alot of places..hah

neway... i'll ge tmy posts up

Holla@ Meh
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Old 02-11-04, 03:16 PM   #11
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peep my links in my sig and vote on them..... intox took this def

Tox got a sick mind, wit rhymes that leave lips fried
I see you're still elevating... gettin stuck on the Hillside
nice multies pretty good

didnt agree to battle?? you said you'd flow if i set it
I'll smash ya face in the ground until ya nose is embedded
blah so so

i spit sulfaric acid that go right through you like ghosts
Everybody laughs at ya wack shit like that dude in ya post
lmao at the second part...nice

Ya unreal... wack n lackin skill... im phat n ill
ya squads wack...the Jaguars only pro team in Jacksonville
lol nicer personal and punch

relax n chill... dont be stressin cuz you cant rap at all
You need to put the mic down n stick to playin basketball
blah..

speak only when spoken to i didn't agree to batter you/
i mean battle you and shatter your brain while it's swellin from INTOXICATING MATTER TO/2
stretched and no

yo on this site like every CHUMP they should ban u/
but after you read 1 line u'd be my biggest fan 2 /4
no no no please no....booooooo

fag... i make this into a fist fight for all as a spectacle/
that way they can see JOHN beat in this HETEROSEXUAL/6
so so

my rhymes are more deadlier than the next spittin venom to intoxes neck/
then kill him in a brutal lashing for everyone to make things correct/8
stretched but aight

my shockingly refreshing lyrical quenches beat even the most of such sinches/
turn men into vagina's and make them all bitches/10
stretched

the most wanted sheet has surprisingly took off a name for it's list/
cuz' intox won't battle now Y.. i think he slit his wrist/
blah

peep my links in my sig and vote on them..... intox took this def
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Old 02-11-04, 09:07 PM   #12
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thx for the vote
UPPIN .............................
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Old 02-11-04, 11:02 PM   #13
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Flow - Intox /Structure was much better than johns making it flow way better John try to make your lines the samw size

Originality - Intox /took originality with ease john much to basic wordplay

Punches - Intox /John your punches just whernt landing i felt intoxs alot more much harder punches

Personals - Both /Both of you had some nice personals, making fun of eachothers names

Multies - Intox / John you just had no multies so Inotx took this one with ease

Vocab - Intox /Intox had Much better wordplay and vocab very creative had me laughing

Overall - Intox /John you should go take a look at some of the elevated front lines and elite front lines and learn some things to elevate your verses and get alot of practice in. Inotx took this with ease.

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Old 02-13-04, 12:33 AM   #14
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Uppin #5................................................ ............
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Old 02-14-04, 11:35 PM   #15
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speak only when spoken to i didn't agree to batter you/
i mean battle you and shatter your brain while it's swellin from INTOXICATING MATTER TO/2
^^ok kinda streched 2/5

yo on this site like every CHUMP they should ban u/
but after you read 1 line u'd be my biggest fan 2 /4
whack 0/5

fag... i make this into a fist fight for all as a spectacle/
that way they can see JOHN beat in this HETEROSEXUAL/6
whack 1/5

my rhymes are more deadlier than the next spittin venom to intoxes neck/
then kill him in a brutal lashing for everyone to make things correct/8
ok 2/5

my shockingly refreshing lyrical quenches beat even the most of such sinches/
turn men into vagina's and make them all bitches/10
decent 3/5

the most wanted sheet has surprisingly took off a name for it's list/
cuz' intox won't battle now Y.. i think he slit his wrist/
whack 0/5

[bJohn 8/30[/b]

u need to quit numbering ur line thas newb shit...u also need to try and keep ur structure even its real crooked..u need to work on punches and flow also
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Tox got a sick mind, wit rhymes that leave lips fried
I see you're still elevating... gettin stuck on the Hillside
good fow nice mult 3/5

didnt agree to battle?? you said you'd flow if i set it
I'll smash ya face in the ground until ya nose is embedded
decent 2/5

i spit sulfaric acid that go right through you like ghosts
Everybody laughs at ya wack shit like that dude in ya post
nice 3/5

Ya unreal... wack n lackin skill... im phat n ill
ya squads wack...the Jaguars only pro team in Jacksonville
whack 1/5

relax n chill... dont be stressin cuz you cant rap at all
You need to put the mic down n stick to playin basketball
whack 1/5

intox 10/30

u need to work on harder punches and quit forcin multies...........
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