10-15 lines, be done in 30 mins.
-bojangler

you spit first.

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yo, I'll vote on this when its dropped when you vote on mine.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120615

ok flow intelligent ... i guess i'll go first.

yo flow, you ain't intelligent, battlin the jangle master
cause i leave ya split in half, like magic-box disasters
the bars you spit entrap yourself like clumsy child molesters
ya less intelligent than babies who are still in third trimesters
meanwhile, i spit bars solider than those at fort knox (place where gold bars are stockpiled)
my rap leave ya pantin like SARS, or as if you just sucked 4 cocks
ya only intelligent flow is pouring out ya cranium
i leave ya ass underground, like unflowered geraniums
bust out your four-leaf clover, if ya wanna stay a 3-d man
or this rap will 'roll you over', like minutes on wireless plans
the only way you win battle raps is ridin dongs
no wonder you got more 'claps' than gospel songs
and more aids than refreshing sports drinks (i.e. gator'ade')
i congealed then concealed your brain son, now how ya gonna think

my bad fam i hard to get offline for a lil while ill drop my verse now

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aiight check it...


this guy has 2 faces even his hand dont want to date//
your so ugly u have to fake an orgasm when u masturbate//
you say your dope..your not..youll get choked and dropped//
i hope you stop..cuz im waistin lines on someone who hopes hes hott//
i spark when i rap..u act hard u will discard when i start to clap//
you could fall in a "cardiac arrest" and your "heart still couldnt attatck"//
youll never be classic come sick or forever be ravaged//
i spit castratin lines that will sever your package//
the measure of drastic is that your ass is treasure for faggots//
to battle me you must find pleasure in caskets//
murder you?! im doin it...and if you get used to this verbal abussiveness//
then ill have to start beating you with my bars untill u need a tube to piss//
im sorry mr bojangle but im gonna leave ya body tangled//
break ya neck and leave ya chin hanging by ya ankles//

~1~

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uppin it

uppin for votes will return the favor

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Yep.. flow intelligent had this one for sure. Bojangler.. you had the vocab category and you had nice rhymes.. but your punches were lacking. The personal with the name = brains spilling was nice.. but the rest of your verse was lacking bad. Flow meanwhile had sick wordplay, check it:

"you could fall in a "cardiac arrest" and your "heart still couldnt attatck"//"

Flow, you still gotta elevate.. a lot of your punches are kinda basic, but still a pretty decent verse. Both of you guys, concentrate on original, personal punches rather than wordplay n vocab. Work on using setup lines ot make your punches stronger...

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HA! funny shit mangs.
BJ-"yo flow, you ain't intelligent, battlin the jangle master
cause i leave ya split in half, like magic-box disasters"-this was pretty funny
"the only way you win battle raps is ridin dongs
no wonder you got more 'claps' than gospel songs"-this one was ur best punch, and one of the funniest i've seen in a while, good one, lol.
ur ending-"and more aids than refreshing sports drinks (i.e. gator'ade')
i congealed then concealed your brain son, now how ya gonna think" was another pretty good punch.

FL-i liked how u kept doggin him for being ugly, it was like readin a story, me likey.
"this guy has 2 faces even his hand dont want to date//
your so ugly u have to fake an orgasm when u masturbate//"-the opener was hardcore man, that shit was soooo funny
"the measure of drastic is that your ass is treasure for faggots//
to battle me you must find pleasure in caskets//" the 'ass' line was pretty sicc, if i woulda done it tho, i would switched the lines around. still good
"im sorry mr bojangle but im gonna leave ya body tangled//
break ya neck and leave ya chin hanging by ya ankles//" the closer was good too, so it felt like the whole thing was pretty solid, go start-middle-finish.

i liked this battle, but i really do'nt know who to vote for, i'm'a leave and come back in a while.

lol, ok, i read them again, and flow's was easier to understand, BJ, some of your's i just didn't get.

vote- flizzow

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won-3 quickpunch,gotaasswhoopin4u, orijinal, madhatter81

good look on votes and feedback will return the favor ~1~

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