LyRiKaL VS POPPA BEAN 10 LINES AND POPPA BEAN GOES FIRST

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aight

checkin' in

ima vote on a few battles then i'll key something

actually

fuck this i wont battle in the front lines

ima set it up in elavated front lines

go there

never mind your not allowed in the elavated yet either

Lets Do It Now U Go First
I Am Ready So Wuz Up U Gon Battle Me Or What

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don't get tough, try to give me a few minutes
cuz thats enough time to crush this dudes image
your too timid,
my bullets dont tell lies, so i stand behind truth
to bad your name isn't an adjective that describes you
as i ride through, i challenge fools so this chump is finished
the kid saw my talent pool and tried jumpin' in it
fuck his writtens, punk is gettin' ripped so the twerp gets buried
cus his shittin' more bricks than if he worked for a masonary
face it ferry, if you go on stage i make you break a leg
if you dont i'll start bustin' shells like i'm makin eggs

Poppa Bean// U Make Me Poppa Beam// And Let That Bitch Hit Right Though Ya Spean// Tha Way Ya Shorty On My Nutz Its On A Dong Shame// Cause Not Just Her But Niccas Know Im Tha Hottest Rookie In Tha Game Like Im Le Bron James// Tha Real Name Iz Kash// When Haters See Me Thy Make A Exit Real Fast// Cause I Bust Things That Will Make Em Duck And Dash// Cause Thy Know Im Like Jay-z I Squeeze First And Ask Questions Last// To Bad// I Gots Ta Get Rid Of This Pettafile// U Gon Make Have U Screamin In Fear Like That Guy On Ur Proflie//why Yo Tryin Ta Duck And Dodge Lyrikal// Iz It Becuase Tha Kid Spit So Subliminal// God Dont Like Ugly So That Make U Bibical// When I Say That I Can Fuck Up Physical// That Means I Can Pop Shot That Can Push Back Ya Mental//
Nuf Said This Battle Iz Me Holla Ya Boy Iz Ova My Win

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Poppa gets this... both were kinda weak.. but his was actually aimed at his opponent.
Lyrikal.. structure was poor... punches worse. Vocab was okay, but as said, most of your verse was self gratification.. Also don't capital every damn letter...
Poppa.. structure was much better compared. Punches were kinda played.. 'talent pool' etc.. but they hit at least. Some creativity/originality in there.. as well as some decent similies/metas..
Overall a much better battle verse.. took most catergorys..

Vote - Poppa Bean

Return the favour - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113466

Lyrical - ya verse was basic.. no hard punches or complex ones... didnt hit hard and alot of ya shit was just tryin to make u look good... try to get some personals in there and metas, wordplay was lacking too, inclue that in ya verse also.. ya struct was horrible too, it was n00bish and you should spit it like Poppa Bean did...

Poppa - first of all... ya struct was perfect with the way u formated it and ya lines were a good lenght.. none really varied that much and none were stretched.. ya flow was good, like i said none of ya lines were stretched and none were really varied... you had some decent punches, and some ok personals, ya wordplay was ok and u did have some there... so overall u had a decent verse.. much better then Lyrical and it was enough to take this battle

V/ Poppa bean

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lyrical ur the wackest emccee on rb that verse was wack........b4 i hit this battle up go hit up ma battle wit weezy snypz i aint leavin the link so go find it if u dont hit it up not my loss

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wow

this site is active as fuck

.

yo moma was active wen i popped a bean in er pu$$y

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^^ha ha

not funny newbie

i would sonn you but poppa dont like retarded children

^^^^^ hahaha chessy as fuck but funny!

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