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02-19-04, 08:54 AM | #1 | |||||||
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IP: 22ED 1BB0
My heart is racing, legs are aching,
Im Shaking, While The Rap Fans Are Waiting, Im losing grip of the mich, and the patience is breaking, The audiences cheers are now boo's and there Hating, Frustrated by why my lips quiver but wont speak, Intense motions on the inside, i can feel the heat, But i still cant retreat, cant even feel my feet, Im frozen, Im fighting for air but i cant defeat, No silence has been broken, Im choking, Hoping, That soon maybe some words will be spoken, My eyes are pinned on the white painted back wall, People are pointing, Thinking im just another white-beg-black fool, I cant stand tall, Im a live on stage fool, about to fall, Im fighting with myself in a fight to breathe brawl, My reputation is shattered, im no longer cool. JUST THOUGH ID MAKE A FEW LYRICS ABOUT THIS SUBJECT COZ IT CAN RELATE TO MANY PEOPLE. LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK. PE@CE
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02-19-04, 12:44 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 9588 E886
For the most part it was nice I thought. Yeah I believe a lot of peeps can relate to gettin in a battle and gettin froze up.
Though I wasnt feelin this part to much: My eyes are pinned on the white painted back wall, People are pointing, Thinking im just another white-beg-black fool, I cant stand tall, Im a live on stage fool, about to fall, Im fighting with myself in a fight to breathe brawl, My reputation is shattered, im no longer cool... But the rest was straight dawg. |
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02-19-04, 01:01 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: B4E1 2E2C
Thiz iz str8 my nigga nice flow n vocab was ok but overall itz good
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02-22-04, 07:38 AM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 22ED 1BB0
Thanx.
Pe@ce
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02-22-04, 03:48 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 22ED 1BB0
Juss Wonderin if i could get any more views on this...?
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02-22-04, 03:57 PM | #6 | ||||
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IP: 3E94 B418
yo dawg even tho you dissed me. this was apretty dope verse. i like that.keep droppin
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02-22-04, 03:59 PM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: 22ED 1BB0
^Thanx
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02-22-04, 04:07 PM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: EED2 4F8F
dis was ok....nice vocab...keep dropin...try keepin lines da same lenght...aaaiiggghhttt!!!!!
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02-22-04, 04:09 PM | #9 | |||||||
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IP: 22ED 1BB0
^Aight^
Pe@ce
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02-23-04, 07:21 PM | #10 | ||||||
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that was real tight......sounds real good keep it up
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