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Check in by: 05-01-05 at 02:28 PM

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Verbal has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-28-05 02:45 PM.

lyrical clarity has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-28-05 03:01 PM.

I'll leave lyrical clarity in my wake........as another mangled victim
Because I know the ropes.........well enough to hang you with 'em
Shut up, you're just a rap pup, a straight up perpetrator..
Who spits piss flows so I hit you with a rolled-up newspaper..
This awkward daisy can't handle combat, he's tripping on his boots..
While I take rakes to fakes, and rip this fag up by his roots..
His verses are played & second-rate, he's rapping with pawned skills
He talks so much shit, I'm convinced his bowels replaced his tonsils..
This fag's not on my level....plain to see he's not worthy...
Getting his ass stuffed daily like Thanksgiving turkeys and taxidermy...
I'll wreck this herb's empty dome and put knots in his bean..
Lop off his head, throw him a diploma and watch him drop a degree..

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ima give you a vision of verbal imagery that will make you vanish....
too verbally comlicated for you to comprehend like my verse in spanish...
i'll murder instantly like car bombs in afganistan...
only time you bust is when your amo ooze out ya hand..
i spit sporadic like a classic hip hop addict my punches is automatic...
your manual flow is not good in the clutch so the system pm's u to give up...
you up against a brick wall like the rv background...
btich ass asking for a ghraphical picture wit tupac in a night gown...
i'll beat you down like hop'o did oprah on color purple...
you put ya toungue in puss and recite words in the dictionary....
thats why you earned the name verbal...
ima have you clickin the help button in programs under the start menu...
you a loser :couldnt defeat me if you had infinite continues...
sendin you punches like roy jones in his prime...
pussy being raised by two men your zodiac is now a rainbow sign...

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good drop boi..at least you dropped quick..unlike some bs niggahs on rv be taking all day................

upppppppppppppin for votes.................lets keep this shit movin...

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Same your way LC, I hate wasting creds on a battle where the other guy has no intentions of responding...

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Voted For: Verbal

Clarity:

ima give you a vision of verbal imagery that will make you vanish....
too verbally comlicated for you to comprehend like my verse in spanish...
ok.....
i'll murder instantly like car bombs in afganistan...
only time you bust is when your amo ooze out ya hand..
nice personal...
i spit sporadic like a classic hip hop addict my punches is automatic...
your manual flow is not good in the clutch so the system pm's u to give up...
decent line...not strong
you up against a brick wall like the rv background...
btich ass asking for a ghraphical picture wit tupac in a night gown...
ehhh....nah
i'll beat you down like hop'o did oprah on color purple...
you put ya toungue in puss and recite words in the dictionary....
thats why you earned the name verbal...
nah...
ima have you clickin the help button in programs under the start menu...
you a loser :couldnt defeat me if you had infinite continues...
dis was ok...
sendin you punches like roy jones in his prime...
pussy being raised by two men your zodiac is now a rainbow sign...
shoulda worded dis line betta...not strong

Verbal:

I'll leave lyrical clarity in my wake........as another mangled victim
Because I know the ropes.........well enough to hang you with 'em
nice opener...
Shut up, you're just a rap pup, a straight up perpetrator..
Who spits piss flows so I hit you with a rolled-up newspaper..
ummmm wtf??...no
This awkward daisy can't handle combat, he's tripping on his boots..
While I take rakes to fakes, and rip this fag up by his roots..
i get it...so i think it was nice
His verses are played & second-rate, he's rapping with pawned skills
He talks so much shit, I'm convinced his bowels replaced his tonsils..
best line...nicely worded...shoulda saved it 4 da end
This fag's not on my level....plain to see he's not worthy...
Getting his ass stuffed daily like Thanksgiving turkeys and taxidermy...
turkeys dont get stuffed daily...thankgivin comes once every year...
I'll wreck this herb's empty dome and put knots in his bean..
Lop off his head, throw him a diploma and watch him drop a degree..
nice closer...

opener, middle, closer = Verbal

he got my vote, he used a personal or two...but his start and end took it...nice battle tho clarity...return da favor in 1 of my battles niggas...1

"Shut up, you're just a rap pup, a straight up perpetrator..
Who spits piss flows so I hit you with a rolled-up newspaper.."

Yeah, I had problems wording that one....smacking a puppy who pisses on the floor with a newspaper.......didn't really work......

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Voted For: Verbal

Verbal gets my vote here......

Both had ok punches but verbal came harder and seemed to me more original and creative... his vocab was also better..

Both need to improve by dissing the opponent and making him look bad...USE PERSONALS!!! no hate rtf.

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