Both Of Ours First Battle..

Rules:
10 Lines = 5 Barz
5 Votes Winz
No Dickryding and Shit

.::Checkity Check::.

~R~

Check.
CHeck
check
check
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check.........

Yo..Yo...

Adominal blows from these lyrical punches got you on the
operating table, Comical flows, spitting in verbal bunches, got you into a mystical fable/ Playa you ain't able, to comprehend my vocab when I'm spittng into solitude, You comical? Your flows baghdad, reason enough why my lryical drops be bombing you/
Lyrically stopming you, my thought patterns equal biohazards
I'ma fucking phenomenon, like your girls day-job get on your knees and let R-Rated spit some cum upon/ With acidic tongue spits leaving your dome split, flipt this script, underachieved with this battle of verbal conflicts, Bitch!/

~R~

Aight....Upping For Votes As Soon As He Drops His Shit, Which Should Be ASAP Since Its Been 20 Minutes..

~R~

Shit a Metaphor Couldnt Be Placed to this Battle Before I Spitted
Borderin Opposites, This battles Breakin Up With him.."It Felt Restricted"
His Lid is Comin off As I pop The lock To these Signature Bitches
Sad tho You used Adobe 8 and It Still Came out With Glitches
Since This Kid Is a Nerd I Speak in his Terms With a
While Ull See Tons of Happy Faces/Smilies Pertainin To his Verse:
hahahah Wow Some Fishy Shit With Your Verse Sharky
Lets all Call Your Rape Victim Pamphlete Personals? Hardly.

Uppin.
The Id hit it Line is not like id hit it like id tap that u know like a girl
but id beat on him.

Well I like how you had a whole hour to do your spit and I only had 15 minutes..Fucker...

~R~

Uppin....Come On Peeps Don't Sleep....

Holla At A Pimp!

~R~

dis was a week battle...
Re$TricTed....not many punches,some were ok but others were jst week......flow was there in places....some lines didnt rhymes tho.....no structure...wordplay was there but needs work.......personals wernt there at all....overall...6/10..
Pa'ea ....no real punches and dats wot wins battles bro......once agen some lines didnt rhyme....no flow....bacis structure.....wordplay was elemetry.....personals were none...overall.....2.5/10.....very week...needs a lot of work bro....and stop using those smilies,kinda childish...no ofence...keep it up both of u.....
v/Re$TricTed

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...personals are u stupid?
did u not read the first 2 lines
....omg. fuckin idiots in front lines.
:\ what punches didnt u get idiot.

Wasn't really a punch man, all you did was use my name in your bar.....doesn't really count.

~R~

Only My 2nd Time Uppin...

C'mon Ya'll Don't Sleep On Dis..

Only 4 More Votes Needed To Close This Battle..

HOLLA AT A PIMP!

~R~

decent battle

personals-neither
punches-paea
similies-pea
complexity-paea
creativity-paea
multiples-restricted...thatz all ur verse was
structure-paea
humor-both
vocab-both
overall-paea

again a weak battle
punches need to be more better from both of u
restricted work on ur punches instead of multiples

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.TCS.

Overall the battle was okay

Like everyone else is saying, personals are neccessary in a battle, Pa'ea kinda used one in the beginning, but you gotta make that more obvious to clown him.
Restricted the whole baghdad thing is played out, every other battle i see that, i know you can come up with some hotter shit, cuz your last bar was bangin.Also the first bar was okay, I liked the whole operatin table thing.
Pa'ea i didnt get the whole Id hit it thing but your last three lines were dope.

keep up the good work to both of you
Even though Pa'ea came up with a personal the winner is

Restricted