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Old 02-28-04, 02:05 PM   #1
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Spittin It

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I dont Claim my fame//
I Dont Hav 2 jus luk at ma name//
Im Down 2 Rip On those rappers hu are lame and rip out there spinal cord//
ill destroy you worse than eminem ripped whitey ford//
Call me shit from afar we wil see who's shitter//
I leave you more hurt than Em left Whitey When He released quitter//
Your Nuffin Its time 2 retire//
Like Jay Z Ya Dates gon expire//
dont claim u gangster like 50 and his crew//
Cum test me im G thru and thru//
From ma heart up 2 my brain where i keep my intelligence//
Down to my dick where tha hoez get to see my sixth sense//
ma defense cant me broke//
good job evry mornin i drink my egg yoke//
smokin 85 spliffs dont even begin 2 choke//
you like rabbit from 8 mile 1 verse and your voice begins to croak//
Im Untouchable like a heavily armed door//
Im Like a rock hard wall//
im like shaquille o neil i stand tall//
muthafucka i spittin it like tupac shakur//

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Old 02-28-04, 02:32 PM   #2
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Old 02-28-04, 04:11 PM   #3
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uummm...dis was ok...simple rhyme tho...flow was nice...structure needs work.....but 4 a newb it was nice...keep it up...overall 5/10
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