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Spittin It
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I dont Claim my fame//
I Dont Hav 2 jus luk at ma name// Im Down 2 Rip On those rappers hu are lame and rip out there spinal cord// ill destroy you worse than eminem ripped whitey ford// Call me shit from afar we wil see who's shitter// I leave you more hurt than Em left Whitey When He released quitter// Your Nuffin Its time 2 retire// Like Jay Z Ya Dates gon expire// dont claim u gangster like 50 and his crew// Cum test me im G thru and thru// From ma heart up 2 my brain where i keep my intelligence// Down to my dick where tha hoez get to see my sixth sense// ma defense cant me broke// good job evry mornin i drink my egg yoke// smokin 85 spliffs dont even begin 2 choke// you like rabbit from 8 mile 1 verse and your voice begins to croak// Im Untouchable like a heavily armed door// Im Like a rock hard wall// im like shaquille o neil i stand tall// muthafucka i spittin it like tupac shakur// Last edited by Karlos : 02-28-04 at 02:21 PM. |
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uummm...dis was ok...simple rhyme tho...flow was nice...structure needs work.....but 4 a newb it was nice...keep it up...overall 5/10
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