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02-28-04, 02:58 PM | #1 | |||||||
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- London Underground -
IP: 22ED 1BB0
To the world, are rappers are just another sound,
Swept Underground, Like We're Just Outta Bound, We just wanna rap with a different accent in a new way, Make A Shitload of money, And represent the UK, Music is our life, just give us an opportunity, And we'll create a place full of wealth and rap unity, Ive studied rap for years and thats a well known fact, But What the fuck am i to do, with no major contract? Pe@ce
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02-28-04, 04:06 PM | #2 | |||||||
Dont Push Me Of Regret It
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IP: EED2 4F8F
dis was pretty week.......its was to short....flow was nice...wordplay was basic.....structure was basic...keep it up.....4/10
make it longer
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Yo HeXeN More Ture Than A Felection
More Gifted Than Christmas
Minds So Unclear Like Third World Water
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02-28-04, 04:35 PM | #3 | ||||||
~SAINT SINNER~
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IP: EC0B 84C7
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ITS COOL. BESIDES A FEW TYPING ERRORS AND A BASIC RHYME SCHEME, I FEEL IT. KEEP WRITING. 5/10. ...SUPERVILLAIN
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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection??? ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE "I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love. |
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