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Old 03-01-04, 03:01 AM   #1
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An emotional struggle i'm fightin inside.
The only thins that were hurt, were my name and my pride.
Today i layed with my girl and i cryed.
It hurts me to hate, so i let go, well i tryed.
It's an up-hill battle but i'll never give in,
cause happieness is tha prize if I win.
It helps knowin you went through the same shit that i'm in.
If you didn't you will so wipe off that grin.
Cause when you do you'll know the pain of my sin
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Old 03-01-04, 10:22 PM   #2
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i really enjoyed this. you expressed your emotion real well and i thought you used the perfect words you needed to express your emotion. very well written i like this keep doing what your doing i like your work
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