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03-05-04, 01:58 PM | #1 | |||||||
Dont Push Me Of Regret It
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Lyrical MC feat Da Reign Man
IP: 92E6 7769
Lyrical:
I put da pen to da pad to extend da distance between me and MC's they tryin' to grab, Transporting Wona-bs- in to rehab, Lyrical host da mic Producing fear in there cold blooded soal, MC's can play da game but they score da own goal, But im freash of da block wid da illest Rhymes dis is me conquest, freeze you in da moment like it was no contest, but my dopeness features me as I lay MC's to Rest, But Lyrical Is just illin',slench dis chance like a dealer would take pillin', pump up me vocab and take dis hip hop chiilin', But my vouls strech like Rick wallers under~pants, grillin' challenger wid me 7-0 battle stance, English Lituriture is simply like a Godly in my conquest, As i put a pound to da gut of Mc's like Im verbaly best, Makin' MC's battle me wearin' a bullet proof vest Reign Man you need to better choose your diction, or lose the mission, your so wack, you dont even know what crew your dissin. I strike with allusive diction, ill kill your whole team then leave huge description of of how i abused, then decided to shoot you bitches... how i took your wallets, AND how i plan to use your riches, noone will say shit!... they all know what i do to snitches. I mutilate your fict fictitious stiches, on all the suspicious bitches. and leaving them fixed in ditches, crushing pills and getting my fixins, Im Bush, mixed with Nixon, crossed with Clinton, that means im a thug and a crook, whos done every drug in the book..... and cant work with a slut without sticking his dick in
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Yo HeXeN More Ture Than A Felection
More Gifted Than Christmas
Minds So Unclear Like Third World Water
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03-07-04, 11:43 PM | #2 | ||||
Word.
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IP: 522A 016B
This was pretty good i thought...in the beginning you had some good structure, the lines could have been a little more evened out a bit but it was alright but then in the second part you kinda just pushed it all together, try not to do that....but overall this was alright read...keep at it.
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