Hi. This was a post of mine from an open mic thread at another board. I wondered if you could give it a look over and possibly give me some pointers?

# So the mic is open? Let Sixty Three close it
# The flow is hot because the man himself chose it
# Ya'll spitting verses concerning guns and violence
# But I say no, I don't agree with that nonsense
# My weaponary is lyrical, my word the ammo
# I shoot out verses like my name was Rambo
# Yeah, I ain't gangsta, I don't run the town
# But this boy doesn't need a nine to wear the crown
# So come on, move over, it's a new uprising
# With a flow that's unaggressive, but hypnotizing
# Even biggie, biggie, biggie, he could see
# The new king of the game his name is Sixty Three

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six-three # you put lyrics to beats people demand the instrumental #

"... WUT! ... WUT! ... A-YEY-YAH!" a day in the life of li'l jon