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norm rules.
dont check inta one of ya other battles, ya already got 2 threads.
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This is, this is my first chance to show these cats/
imma amaze yall at first glance that i dont need any gats/

Its hattrick vs Tha Baker boy/the faker boy/the hip-hop hatin boy/
Listen you cant fight a big dog, you only 13, a 6thgrader boy/

Its tha battle of the elemtent/
Im like water i just flow and flow/
You a chump down, this is how im tellin-it/
You, you like wind, ya just BLOW AND BLOW./

Ey yo i may be new here, new to town/
But I'll rock this cat better then his own tims/
Hes Five-Foot-Three nd closa the ground/
Then my new 20" chrome rims/

Like i said, ya only thriteen/
ya not big-or-mean/
ya fat and-not-lean/
Your a baker,but now-a-bitch~ go make me some lean cuisine


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Spit it.

dang my easiest oppenent congradulations....stopped reading yo verse after da 1st line....u need 2 take yo rhymes wit vinilla ice,yall embarassing da whole nation.....not even tryin cuz its jus 2 simple......dont need a punchline 4 him,cuz his rhymes was already cripple......disabled,need 2 be deleted from da site.....go back 2 da old version nvm go 2 aim or chatrooms 4 a fight....killin dis nigga making him look bad his moms kno he a discace at his age.....even if it showed his face as tupac he a still get booed of stage.....take his keyboard,teache him suttin called structure lines...throw da dictonary at his head,so he wont copy da word play of mine.....kill dis nigga less in 2min and come wit lesser lines.....i can sing my ma on here 2 get at u and still have betta rhymes.....u need 2 take yo spitts and store em back in wal mart.....put da gay in his hat so he can call him self a gay heart....take yo rhymes remove and neva eva spit......and take yo wack ass rhymes and put em back in da hat trick..

^^^^^^^^^ upppin 4 votes...........i make it look easy

-------------------------uppin for votes.........dont hate.

Hattrick gets my vote. A tight battle but Hattrick just took this for me, bakerboy seemed to just go for a complex rhyme schem which unfortunately didnt come off.

Vote-Hattrick.

Would like some votes in my battle!

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Well fucCk it i can't vote on' that uppah shyt

Check Hattrick's Lines:

This is, this is my first chance to show these cats/
imma amaze yall at first glance that i dont need any gats/

There u got word play and a strong punchline better then any of BackerBoys.

THis line below is multis plus a good punch line.

Its hattrick vs Tha Baker boy/the faker boy/the hip-hop hatin boy/
Listen you cant fight a big dog, you only 13, a 6thgrader boy/

And a strong final verse to finish it all of.

Ey yo i may be new here, new to town/
But I'll rock this cat better then his own tims/
Hes Five-Foot-Three nd closa the ground/
Then my new 20" chrome rims/

See thast a proper verse, droping decent bars

votes should be conducted on

personals: Hattrick
punches: Hattrick
Flow: Hattrick
Multis: Hattrick
Wordplay: Hattrick
Lyrical Content: BakerBoy

Its easy to say Over all .....Hattrick

(this is a well explained vote)

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word good looks on the vote.


uppin for votes!

i didnt like hattrick verse it was 2 simple bakerboy came wit better structure lines in my opinion he gets my vote

Vote disqualified for Cheating. raps most wanted = bakerboy. Banned.
- strobe

breakdown for hattrick:

flow: solid flow kinda simple but it would of made a good audio i'd give this 7/10 best part of the verse

volcab: reallly nothing special you need to work on this if you want to compete against the other guys on this board 4/10

punches: none... a couple of open swings but nothing that i think really connected try harder next time to really address your oppenent 3/10

overall:14/30 i think it was probably one of your first verse. and if so a good start just not good enough to get a win hee but keep trying

breakdown for bakerboy:

flow: a little shaky i had to read through it a few times to get it not horrible but could of used some work 6/10

volcab: you shined in some spots and it all seemed to fit in good without wrecking the flow definatly better then your oppenent 6/10

punches: again both of you didn't really address your oppenent like you should but you had a couple of alright lines like," throw da dictonary at his head,so he wont copy da word play of mine" 6/10

overall:18/30

vote--not the best battle as in punches but you both had pretty good mechanics jsut work on your punches. my vote is for bakerboy

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


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Hattrick , I liked it cause you had some good punches, and a strong finish.

this verse was strong

"Its tha battle of the elemtent/
Im like water i just flow and flow/
You a chump down, this is how im tellin-it/
You, you like wind, ya just BLOW AND BLOW./"

Then Bakerboy went and it made your stuff look simple compared to his.

Loved this line "dont need a punchline 4 him,cuz his rhymes was already cripple"

I thought Bakerboy's best punches were stronger than Hattrick's.

You both had great structure and personals.

Basically the deciding factor was Bakerboy's verse was more complex and that was the deciding factor.

Vote - Bakerboy

ok i think that both of your verses were some of the best if seen, been i have only votes like 6 times. i think both punches are good and flow was made seen. this battle i think is made on personals. The best ones were on bakerboy.
vote~bakerboy

oh yes i almost forgot come by and drop a vote http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116022