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I wrote it as soon as you sent me that message
so i'll write it sooner , ain't got time for those 15 minutes

Swing low cuz woof you made me dick wood
Get yo pants down show em the proof
we stay wit a bitch under our roof
You misunderstood what means spit
doesn't mean sucking and wetting it
This battle i'll be the MVP u'll be the MPV
u'll be fucked by any voting MC
Bitch wrong you ain't a fag
ur a fag hag BITCH!
I'm fit to hit ,you're fit to knit
and this battle will be ur obit

homie, your style is so poor, this win should be mine
like a chiropractor my lines straight up spines
you need an expert cos you are so bent
u a lil batty boy, u speak with a 'elton john' accent
DetON@e u cant 'spit' u know wanna kno why?
its cos u used to 'swallowing' and sucking dicks dry
u a pro, u gots more experience than a hoe ya heard me?
u seen more men naked than a secondhand throwback jersey
u new to these games - ur a rookie like lebron james
my lyrics are hot - u will get burnt by the flames-mentionin no names,
im guna make u cry-shed tears like a onion kno wot i mean?
ur eyes will be watering n ya mascara be running faster than Morris Green
im goin to haunt you son like a ghost on 'halloween'
so stop hallucinating cos like 'starbucks' you full of too much caffiene

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Metta's- KIng
Flow- King
Opener-Deton
Punches-King
Overall-King


Deton--> "This battle i'll be the MVP u'll be the MPV" what the hell is a MPV think your syk'n your self out dogg

Get a look in the rap dictionary, it's Multi purpose vehicle
Mvp it's most valuable poet on the mic

Yeah, "MPV" threw me for a loop too. I was tryin' to switch around "most valuable player" to "most played somethin-or-other". Oh well. Too obscure, didn't work.

Kingz didn't hit all that hard, but he had the analogies, wordplay, better rhymes and concepts all around. Vote goes to him.

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uppin............................ dont sleep on this plz

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I enjoyed Kingz rhyme more. He had good wordplay and some clever idea's. Det had some good rhymes but the overall work was not as impressive.

My vote goes to Kingz.

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six-three # you put lyrics to beats people demand the instrumental #

"... WUT! ... WUT! ... A-YEY-YAH!" a day in the life of li'l jon

prety bad battle....week was the first thing in me head wen i read both...kingz came harder..
/kingz

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