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It probably doesn't sound great in writing, but I tried it out with a mellow beat at the back and it sounds good. If I can I might post it in the audio section.
see jimmy one day he be walkin down the block he got he eyes on his rock, and hands on his glock all of a sudden pops poc with his mind gone mad he hits jimmy's block and takes jimmy down bad what there to do? call nine-one-one! jimmy been taken down; he be shot with a gun he had nowhere to go and no places to run now momma been alerted she be crying hysterical she been informed that the bullets hit were 10 plus numerical now better pray for a mircale 'cos jimmy gone into shock his heart's pace going tick tock, tick... tock trying to resusitate but it aint to avail poc no longer free now he be locked up in jail jimmy in a box be attending his own burial momma sit solemnly she still be hysterical it's a day in the life, but this is life in a day in the morning he breathing, in the night he passed away
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six-three # you put lyrics to beats people demand the instrumental # ![]() ![]() "... WUT! ... WUT! ... A-YEY-YAH!" a day in the life of li'l jon |
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dis was nice..vocab was good and structure was there keeep it up
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you ur right it would sound beta in adiuo...sorry for postin twice
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No probs. Thanks for the feedback.
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six-three # you put lyrics to beats people demand the instrumental # ![]() ![]() "... WUT! ... WUT! ... A-YEY-YAH!" a day in the life of li'l jon |
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