Alright Here Da Battle..

Re$tricted Vs. Puertoricanelly


Rules:
10 Lines (5 Bars)
5 Votes Winz
3-0 is Kill
No Hatin or D/R Votes
Spits Due 15 Minutes After Check Ins

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Prnelly slain on niggaz that fortify like they legends/
only way to teach a student is to teach um a lesson(restricted)/

prnelly cant stop wont stop cuz he burn niggaz like a green thumb on plants/
one arm tied behind my back and you still cant stagga ma stance/

repairin you teeth is impossible for even the tooth fairy,
re$tricted scare me?neva not even if u use every word in da dictionary/

my lyrics cova me like peanut butter on bread/
restricted says fuck me? nigga ill slap you and turn yo face red/

you couldnt cut me if yo blade was as sharp as my eye for victory/
Prnelly beatchu worse than a baby tryna throw a fit to me/

Are You Ready...Ready For Dis...Haha..

Its Your Boi Rated!

Check It..

I'ma Wrap My Mic Cord Around Ya Neck Cutting Off Ya Mic Source,
So Your Mute, And That Wack Teck-Neeks' Used By Herb-Whores/
This Ain't No Store, But I Will Write Ya Verse For You Fagget,
Atleast You'll Have Half A Chance, Know You Can't Hack It Fagget/
Spit 5 Bars, Shit I Only Need Two For The "King" To Keep Winning,
Like My 24 Inch Rims, My Punches Will Keep Ya Head Spinning/
You Lack Everything An Emcee Has Used Since The Birth Of The Game,
Knowing You Lame, Battleing Me The Only Way You Getting Fame To Ya Name/
Fuck What You Say, Your Lyrics So Wack, Decency Is Hard To Find Like Nemo,
Like Next Friday, Knocking This Puertorican Out From One Punch Like Debo/

~R~

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Nice Drop Kid, Ya Ish Is Definitly Elevating...

~R~

UPPIN votes!!!!

i vote on ppls shit and they dont returnthe favor so if u vote on my battle vs psyc i will voye on this

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liked both verses i wanna say P but restricted came a lil stronger wit punches and wurdplay but P dont stop hoime hott verse

Prnelly slain on niggaz that fortify like they legends/
only way to teach a student is to teach um a lesson(restricted)/
[]Umm ok, Basic punch - is that? i dont get the restricted/lesson thing...[]

prnelly cant stop wont stop cuz he burn niggaz like a green thumb on plants/
one arm tied behind my back and you still cant stagga ma stance/
[]Green thumb and plants is a horrible metaphor...horrible! but its a metaphor...?
second line is decent if not good[]

repairin you teeth is impossible for even the tooth fairy,
re$tricted scare me?neva not even if u use every word in da dictionary/
[]Tooth fairy? Teeth? I can sort of get your punch but horribly worded...
second line also made no sence...[]

my lyrics cova me like peanut butter on bread/
restricted says fuck me? nigga ill slap you and turn yo face red/
[]Once again...Shitty basic punch...Hmmm catchy flow on that ONE LINE but only in the second half of it...[]

you couldnt cut me if yo blade was as sharp as my eye for victory/
Prnelly beatchu worse than a baby tryna throw a fit to me/
[]Good line...second was awkward to read...please dont do the whole "Gangsta Slang" its herbish...[]

Restricted:

I'ma Wrap My Mic Cord Around Ya Neck Cutting Off Ya Mic Source,
So Your Mute, And That Wack Teck-Neeks' Used By Herb-Whores/
[] Mmm first line is decent, kinda basic...not bad bar[]

This Ain't No Store, But I Will Write Ya Verse For You Fagget,
Atleast You'll Have Half A Chance, Know You Can't Hack It Fagget/
[]Ok would have been a pretty good bar if youg kept out the gay fagget repeate! Redundancy and repeats are SHITTTYYYYY!Y!!!!!! *Cant stress that 'nuff*[]

Spit 5 Bars, Shit I Only Need Two For The "King" To Keep Winning,
Like My 24 Inch Rims, My Punches Will Keep Ya Head Spinning/
[]Decent.[]

You Lack Everything An Emcee Has Used Since The Birth Of The Game,
Knowing You Lame, Battleing Me The Only Way You Getting Fame To Ya Name/
[]Good line. Good multis[]

Fuck What You Say, Your Lyrics So Wack, Decency Is Hard To Find Like Nemo,
Like Next Friday, Knocking This Puertorican Out From One Punch Like Debo/
[]Tyte line[]

Overall, Respect took it with More/Better mutli's, Punches, and Overall structure...

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restricted good punches good flow work on vocab and personals
pn ok punches good flow work on vocab and personals
vote restricted i wasnt feelin ur verse pn it was corny
restricted merked u no question about it

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"Pn": came pretty good but his flow was off. I had to read it a couple of times to understand it fully (the last lines)
"R":Came good as well and had a good intro and finish. It all came down to the flow from my perspective. "R" got my vote.

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ristricted mos def took this one, better wordplay and punches, pn's verse sounded remideal

~my 2 cents~
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