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Old 03-03-04, 06:13 PM   #1
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Lacerationes

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Lacerationes in my mind leave me blind.
Blind to what my life should be.
Mental instability seams to be my destiny.
It's in the cards thats just how it was wrote.
Life so far has been a joke.

When I die I'll be alone and broke.
No one to hear my deepest fears,
No one to catch my fallen tears.
Lacerationes in my mind leave me blind,
but I can see.
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Old 03-04-04, 05:25 PM   #2
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thats pretty simple poem.. not complex.. its deep though..
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