It's on

I heard about you battling that lame joker G-Duece/apparantley your slaw that's why didn't no one vote for you
you just a wanna be rapper who's looking for attention/went to the doctor for a check up but asked for a dick extension
Why you call yourself the truth when in your mind you confused/Can't get pussy so you hit the house pet and it left your dick bruised
When you really hear THE TRUTH you get stunned from the affect/You finger a girl and bust a nut and label it safe sex/
You're an ametuer rapper but you'll still get an award/For the lamest weakest lyrics that kept people bored

These blows gon stick to u wit a permanent attachment/and have u foamin at the mouth like a chemical reaction/stillmatic like Nas, leave u masked up like Jason/u ain't nothin but a mit,i'm the glove like Gary Payton/like the off spring of Saton i'mma Burn ya/i'm Ike in this battle,got u Rolling like Tina Turna/i'm long like a year,u weak like 7 days/this gotta be a joke,who built this Little Maze!/and called it Big just so they can get some attention/i'm the Teacher u the Student, take yo ass to Detention( )

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THE TRUTH,THE WHOLE TRUTH, AND NOTHIN BUT THE THE TRUTH......SO TRUST ME IT AIN'T WORTH IT FAM...NO,NO,NO

You both were cool, and that was about it. Big Maze, you came with a couple of punch lines that were coo.
Big Maze
complexity - 5/10 Could have been a lot better
word choice - 7/10 Average
flow - 8/10 Was coo until the last line. There wasn't no "finnisher involved
favorite line -"You fingered a girl and bust nut and label it safe sex"
The Truth
complexity - 6/10 Showed signs of confidence but lacked the "wow"
word choice - 8/10 Average
flow - 8/10 Pretty good.Gary Payton part was weak
favorite line - "...take yo ass to detention"

The Truth got my vote cause he started strong and finished strong. IF Big Maze would have finished strong, he would have had ya.

Vote: The Truth

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Grim

g-duece got this because he had better flow, and better punches. again, big maze just keeps talking about sex. like it's good for a little while, but after you say it four-five times it becomes lame. work on multis and metaphors, and diss the other guy in terms of rapping. g-duece had metaphors, but dont use "like" too much use "more than" or like a metaphor ex. I AM the devil......, You ARE the shit.... keep elevating, both of you arent bad. big maze=make sure you make sense and its down to the point. im not hatin, aiight peace....
can you vote for one of these?
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116718
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116828

aight here it goes TRUTH got dis one he had betta punches n flow Maze u need to talk about somethin otha den sex it would be a whole lot betta Truth his him wen he said "i'm Ike in this battle,got u Rolling like Tina Turna" dat was hott

the truth is the one that won and thats the truth!


he had better punches and I agree with the others whats with all the sex talk man.

yo but my vote=truth