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03-20-04, 09:53 AM | #1 | |||||||
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just stuff
IP: F25E 8803
2 many dimension 2 mention/
my game iz full of extension/ treat weak spitters like cancer/ i send em into remission/ on a mission 2 B da best/ i gots nothin 2 prove/ my rhymes speak 4 they self/ hand signals 4 da deaf/ rappers droppin their books/ N losin their lesson/ stop stressin..time 2 start...class is now N session/ |
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03-20-04, 12:02 PM | #2 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: 898A F4DE
it was ok not great not shit. work n the flow a bit n up the wordin. keep it up though
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03-22-04, 04:22 PM | #3 | |||||||
Dont Push Me Of Regret It
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IP: 047D 3076
damm...deff needs work...close to wack dawg....you need to make the lines longer and the words more complex...keep each ine wid da same silabols and use some mulit' and it will work beta....nice try tho..pz
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03-22-04, 04:49 PM | #4 | ||||||
Light Weight
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
this is what you get from me the finger and thats it you aint got nothing even me is better than you punk
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