Yall, this be a ditty I did like 3 years ago, y'all please critique this, thanks.



"CHRISTIAN KHMER PRIDE"



V1. "YAW, FREEZE, TIME-OUT!!!" Please...
ENUFF!!! Drop the Flattery!
You're killing my anatomy
Blast the World's Blasted Blasphemy!
How much more Mass of Wrath must I fast?...
I wish they all just "BLAST FROM ME"!!!
LORD, hear my prayer.....
Madd souls turned "battery"
Slaves, brain-washed to "CHRIST wit Blond Hair...
Blue Eyes...". Fears pressed in all sides...
Squeeze my air-supply, low tank on overdrive...
Mind tolerance low, "WHOA"!
DOmestic complications got Vee trippin, 'bout ta "BLOW"!
"LOWD, thank YOU as ma "StrongHold" so I ain't about ta fold!"
"NO!!! I"M STRONGER THAN THAT!"
"YO! Mamma proved y'all Wrong, She put the STRONG on tha Map!". So X-Mark that, "SPLAT"!
Madd Boos ta intraduce tha Brother-Accusa...
That Sleezy Culprit, why who else but "Sir Lucifa",
Ma Arch-Rival Abusa. Black boned to da Blues,
"I refuse ta bruise tha Sore-Losa"! HEADZ UP! NO SHAME!
"East...Bamboo...Rags, to when I first stepped in tha Game
"3rd-World Acclaimed... Ghetto 1981"
Y'all "VICTORIOUS" da Name, more than that I'm GOD's Son
Keys...FATHAZ HOUSE '9, clouds where I'm from, dames holla hun!


V2. BEST BELIEVE! Beneathe the Blade,
How Mamma wreathed in pain,
"B'since YOU BREATHED me my REDEEMA,
Ain't She Conceived in Vain?... So She claims...".
"My Goodness... Weave me back together again"!
"Dear Pops, who stole yo Heart since Mamma's womb,
Kickin' like the Kangaroos? But somehow in time
We'd part as Strangaz livin' under Danger-Roofs,
Str8 Deja-Vu, Right through ma Father's Eyes...
"Yo it's tha PRODIGAL SON trauma, too many times"!
"Sworn Rapper, So I'm cut from the Will of Tha Father's Pride"!
Heat, Static Eye-Ta-Eye, Please tell me, Poppa, "WHY"?!!!
... I guess this "Apple done fall from Your Eye".



V3. CAPITAL "C" to da "A-M-B"... "O-D-I-A"
HEAT as "Em-Bas-Sy" Or "C.I.A.",
Road: "V-I-A International World Missions"
Famine Depression, wrath children, "World Vision"
"'72 Pol Port Regime" colide "Alliance" Coalition,
Yank's Finest-Classed Christians, through tithe acts of givin'
This ties unto gimmicks of Informers Espionage,
Despot Infiltrating Entourage, Hi-Jackin' Diasporas of Ensemble Church Courtyard
Blare-Hearted Cries of a Martyr, Bold-Faced Cries Praying harder over Dying, CHRIST-Sought-After Crowd,
Whom still lyin' ground-upwards, though Riotin' Barrage Flyin' SPORADIC, Same, Hear 'em Die as my Heart's Echoed "LOUD"!
It's All-Out Dog-Eat-Dog charted Guerilla Quilts
Game of Death, Art-of-War plotted the Realest Skills
Khmer-on-Khmer Hatred, Cold-Blooded Spills Tha Ills
Air bombs, "BOOOM!!! LANDMINED!": Enter tha "KILLING FIELDS"!
Stamped, sealed the deal: North - "Land that's Free and Free-For-All"!
Yet's like they borderline banished me to "C"-Block wit no walls!
And far after we reap this all, from our Bloodlines to reform our nation,
"DEAR GOD, how come exiled 'Cam-Victs'(Cambo Convicts) still deported back home to first-base again"???!



Written and produced by President and C.E.O. "VICTORIOUS V." of VICTORY RECORDStm,
2001 BY THA GRACE OF GOD.



JOHN 3:16 "For GOD so loved the world that He gave His only begotten Son, that whoever believes in Him should not perish but have everlasting life.".

My brothers and sisters if you want to be saved unto the next coming eternal life when Christ returns, all you have to do is believe in Him and the truth which is right there.
There is no hope in this life time, everything will pass away, but the Absolute Truth which is JESUS CHRIST will be forever and will reign supremely eminent some day when the elect christians enter heaven, and right now while the narrow Door is still open, everyone is invited to come, but that lil' door wont stay open for ever and someday it will shut, some dont' have until Christ comes to change they mind, they have only a short lifetime before they go, and the next minute can be yo last, so are y'all ready to die and go to hell or live on and go to heaven? That's yo Choice and yo Power to decide, faith, fate and destiny is in yo hands, Satan can NOT take that from you, but after this life, when you'r gone you no longer have that choice, and the choice that you didn't make you will reap for the rest of eternity and that is either "HELL" or "HEAVEN", there is no inbetween or thug's mansion, because what was inbetween was this world but it too will be destroyed by fire for it's sinfullness, so you got 2 masters to submit under and that is Christ or the Devil, but thing is, even the Devil was sentenced to suffer for infinity, so if you don't choose Christ, then what is your destiny left to be, than otherwise the same? Shelah!



Peep out these Christian links for more "www.xtruth.com, www.sphereofhiphop.com".


GOD KEEP YOU MY BELOVED, YO BRO,
Tha V33B5T4R V33N()M*****

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yo I thought you had good vocab and a good rhyme scheme

so overall it was hot!

Luvin the audio style...Realy confused on topic etc etc but hell....i think thats just cuz im stupid

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