better verse wins.

i take it were blind spittin yo
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ok got cha..blind spit it is...IN!! g'luck.
(--)..::::..(--) < look at my artistic ability..isn't that great.

Get battered and bruised, pussy gets left shattered and loose// Could be a rhymin 'Oprah', but my games' still phatter than you// Lyrics poke you in the optic, see there is always more than meets the eye// Defeats in line, you'd think my fists were faggots the way they beat this guy// How you claim to have the backbone to fight me when i'm clutchin your spine// your stubborn ass, put a slug to your dome, see..he does have an open mind// i spoke in time, leave your ass speechless like i was chokin mimes// With token lines, i'll leave you like an abused Teddy Rexpen, spittin broken rhymes//
yeaaa..i'm done with my first battle.

'u aint ready for me' daug....im tellin u these rhymes is far warmer//
you'll jus get knocced over......like S.U.V.s takin sharp corners//
tryin to come to this sight for a new rep...but here u get handled worser//
this webs got vets that'll "flip through u" like "channel surfers"//
after this battle u gon be use to seein med tools//
this guy couldnt elevate if drank a six pack of red bulls//
look art ur name kid......its lattin, jus get rid of that//
ill put a '45' to ya head like throwback 'colts' fitted hat//
imma end it here cuz im runnin outta lyrical material//
now its time to read the verse u got from the back of a box of cereal//


lol.............sorry if ya'll dont get my verse,i need to stop gettin high

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ok this really sucks ass. it's been out for almost 4 days now and not one vote? VOTE YOU PEOPLE!!!!!

i liked habius better.I could fell tha words mo'.Dont get me wrong JustinKredible33 had some pretty tyte rhymes but homegurl just brought a lil more to tha table.

I don't know how old this is, but I just read it, and I'm quite impressed wit both of yall verses, but if I'm a vote I gotta go with habius. JustinK yo verse was hot but habius just threw more consistent punches. Holla back. 1