Ok, man. Here are the rules:

maximum 20 lines
Due by the end of Monday
First to 5 votes wins (Explain why person won; no crew votes)


Aiight, I'll spit first. When I get home, I'll post it. good luck, Duke.

Here I go, hope y'all feel my flow.

You’re full of shit, nigga. All you ever do is talk/
You be more annoyin’ than the sound of fucked up chalk/
You got nothin’ in your cranium except, your fuckin’ features/
When you go aroun’ town, people be callin’ you “Hollow Creature”/
You don’t look like you can rap, you don’t even have a hook/
Plus, your face has more monsters than a Pokemon book/
You jump around from topic to topic, like ADD/
Two plus one be three, but ADDition this not be/
Now look, I wanted a battle, and you was what I got/
Young Duke be your name, under my stepper is where you’ll rot/
You’ll never even make it to… Duke University/
Cuz your currently tied up… Dukin’ wit adversity/
You’re such a pussy, you be afraid to use your own dick/
At night you prolly fuck your gurl with a popsickle stick/
Or maybe you gay, and you let him do the play/
Now you got AIDs. Now whadda ya say?/

That be my stuff. Your up Young Duke. Holla back soon! Good luck

~Mn after readin your verse, I'ma finish this shit. Early~

Come on man, this shit right here aint even a battle to me,
Cause face it, you rhymes suck, you dont even matter to me,
This nigga runnin around actin liek i'm a nobody and hes never heard of me,
Lets take a look back at ya shitty verse, what the hell is Duke University,
Is that shit supposed to be Bolton or his it Boston, you dont even know where the fuck you reppin,
This shit so lopsided that it aint even a battle, It's a motherfuckin 187,
And that right there is a murder to clear it up for you pussy lip niggaz from Bolton,
yo ass is bout to have an 0 and 1 record, look what the fuck you went and started,
Your ass apologized for spellin my name wrong, but yet still you're a killer right?,
You punk ass probably be tryin to post up on ya block wit a butter knife,
you see I'm the reason you still piss the bed and cant sleep at night,
I took it easy this time, but come wit that bullshit again, and 'll put you to sleep for life,

~That Shit Was Too Easy~

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K.L.L. week 3 battle of the week (vs Restricted)
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Non-Phixional Con.Tentz

uppin

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Fuck the Record...
Co-Topical leader on the Phase 1 All-Star team.
Member of Udestructable Emcees (Original)
Member of P.S.A (Original)
Member of Trap Lyrics
Member of Blueprint
First ever KO to Spul
K.L.L. week 3 battle of the week (vs Restricted)
...The above Proves i'm Fukin Dope

Non-Phixional Con.Tentz

breakdown for spul:

flow:straight you threw a bar or two of mutlis at the start and had a nice rhyme shemce going but it kinda fell apart by the end still good enough to get some point though 7/10

volcabretty basic array of words here nothing special 5/10

punches:you had some real good ones like that 'a.d.d.' line my fav was,"At night you prolly fuck your gurl with a popsickle stick/" nice and personal with that one you did good here 9/10

overall:21/30 solid verse great punchlines

breakdown for young duke:

flow:the flow was alright in spots but i think it wa the third bar that kinda got a little big and threw the flow off still worked threw the rest of it though 6/10

volcab:no you didn't do well here at all you rhymed three bars with 'me' in a row expand your volcab exspecially if you want to ever do audio i give you 5/10

punches:this was your best point you had some solid personals and spent the whole verse putting spul down my fav was, "you see I'm the reason you still piss the bed and cant sleep at night," you just spent the verse degrading him something horrible 9/10

overall:20/30

vote--tight battle both swing to hurt with the punches but in the end spul had a slight edge with his flow and volcab and got the win there

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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

Yoh Ima Have To Vote Fo Young Duke On Dis One...Either Of Tha Verses Was That Hott..Duke Just Came Witt Better Vocab And Punches..Holla-Bakk.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116834

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116660

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t=116811&page=2

One.

SpuL- i think ur rhymes were a tad lame, punches very weak, u had a nice flow but in the end it was a battle based on punches,
4/10

Yung Duke- Nice intro, you had it going up to -"the fuck you reppin,"
ur punches came stronger but im sure u could do alot better, u only but just got my vote
5/10

Vote: Yung Duke

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116744
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116602
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116433
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118179

aight fo sho. Still uppin

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Fuck the Record...
Co-Topical leader on the Phase 1 All-Star team.
Member of Udestructable Emcees (Original)
Member of P.S.A (Original)
Member of Trap Lyrics
Member of Blueprint
First ever KO to Spul
K.L.L. week 3 battle of the week (vs Restricted)
...The above Proves i'm Fukin Dope

Non-Phixional Con.Tentz

flow spul yd used the same word to make shit rhyme thata herbish
punches spul by a lil bit yd alot of ur were corny and played
vocab tie both need work
tie spuls wasnt that good but yd used the same word to make it rhyme
structure spull
closer yd by far
yd work on vocab structure personals and flow dont use the same word to make it rhyme
spul work on vocab personals
spul 1 by a lil id like to c a rematch between u 2

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