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L.I. 5 100.00%
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Old 04-17-04, 09:18 PM   #1
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Karl Merks vs L.I.

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Old 04-17-04, 09:21 PM   #2
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yea im here.............................................. ...
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Old 04-17-04, 10:25 PM   #3
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ya'll ni99az gonn battle or wut
 
Old 04-17-04, 10:34 PM   #4
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Okay...NO FEEDING....goodluck

Check it Karl...

Splittin you rhymes apart...you were done from the very start...
Rappin is a given gift of art...jus dont get why herbs like u wanna take part...
PM'in me beggin to battle me...claimin he is hot shit and a hard hittin emcee...
Dawg im on a 9 battle winnin spree...almost didnt answer your PM cuz u a newbie...
Goin a fifth of what i can truly do...throwin easy punches n its stickin like glue...
Dog this is only your battle debut...u should stay away from PM's, look what it got u into!...
Use the injury bug to plague u off this site...U give RB a bad name so quickly leave, TONIGHT...
Eryone knows u wack n white...The shit Michael Jackson says is blacker than what you write...
Finished of wit punches and flow...Rhymes should be knwon as a prostitute for how much they blow...
You'd have more dignity wit a no show...But u dont have enough common sense so place your verse below...

whatever...thats a lil sumtin for ya....stop beggin for battles u fuckin herb
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Old 04-18-04, 01:06 AM   #5
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iight playa
 
Old 04-18-04, 03:17 AM   #6
Karl Merks
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I added links for the retards

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Think i'm worried? Nah, my hands are calm and steady,
Cause like premature ejaculate - you spit before ready.
Battling me wasn't a small mistake, it was massive,
Furious? Nah, You're barely bordering on passive.
Worship and honour me, as if you practiced Shinto.
Poor work does blow up, but you're no Ford Pinto
Just face it bitch...
You're below wack, desperarely trying to get up.
... but unlike a tomato, you'll never ketchup ...
Your structure, flow, vocab, everything stinks,
Do us all a favour and check into these links.

Class is dismissed.

By the way, in no way did I beg you for a battle. You're the fucking idiot spamming his website. Take a look at rule #2, that's a bannable offense. I won't bother taking it up with the admins though.

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Do not post your URL or websites in threads / replies unless another member is specifically asking for something that site has. If you wish to advertise your site, consider purchasing an advertisment.
 
Old 04-18-04, 02:37 PM   #7
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This was a good battle. In the vocab section, I think L.I won it. Some of Karl's vocab was jus too basic. Both of you guys had some good punches. They both hit hard. But I felt some of Karl's punches were a little played out. So l.I gets that. In the flo, I felt Karl's a tid bit more. L.I's was also good, but Karl's was a lil betta. In the opener and closer section, I would say I felt L.I's a little bit more. So 3-1 L.I in the categories. So my vote is for L.I. Good battle by both.
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Old 04-18-04, 02:44 PM   #8
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Are you with Furious Flows? I'm not going to be a prick and get the vote removed, but please stop with the crew voting.
 
Old 04-18-04, 02:46 PM   #9
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Alright.. tight battle..

LI:

Punches: 25/35
You had some nice personals, playing on the fact that he PM you and he's a newbie, but overall you weren't that hard hitting. you get the points mostly for personal and for a pretty decent close.

Creativity/Originality: 20/25
You had a nice spin on the Jackson diss, but its still kind played.. had the rhymes blow = prostitute thing, also kinda played, get the creativity mostly for the original stuff at the start of your verse. At least all your rhymes were pretty new, so props there.

Flow: 13/15
You had lines that were as long as 1.5 regular lines, but you still made it flow pretty nice with the multis.

Vocab/Wordlplay: 3/10
I didn't see anything....

Multis: 5/5
You had them.

How it ties in..: 8/10
Basically you used the multis to help your flow and make your lines not as stretched out, but you had no nice vocab to tie in so only 8/10.

Total: 74/100. Not the best I've seen you spit...

K Merks:

Punches: 28/35
Pretty tight, extra props for having a personal and a solid open and close. Wasn't feeling the Pinto line *at all* though, and that was a whole wasted bar.

Creative: 22/25
Pretty original spin on the premature line, pretty original throughout, nothing was overly played, but most of it wasn't crazy creative.

Flow: 13/15
Pretty solid.

Vocab/wordplay: 5/10
Um.. you had that ketchup thing, that was basically it.

Multis: 0/5
You had none.

How it all ties in: 5/10
The problem is that when you were original, your punches suffered. That pinto/shinto shit was just a crap punch and let the air out of your verse when it hit. Props for mixing in the wordplay into a pretty solid punch with the ketchup though.

Total: 73/100 nice spit for a newb.

Jesus... that's about as close it gets... vote to LI but *very tight*
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Old 04-18-04, 02:47 PM   #10
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Hm.. sorry about the crew voting, I posted that vote before you said that, didn't realize you didn't want it. The above was a totally honest vote though.
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Old 04-18-04, 04:20 PM   #11
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crew votes r allowed...never stated they werent allowed so u guys r straight....honest n well explained votes only and thats what we got so far.....uppin for more...and thanks for the feedback
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Old 04-18-04, 04:32 PM   #12
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LI – nice a punch in every line
Flow – LI, Karl’s was boring, showing very little experience
Punches – both you cats came hard, still karl was too basic
Personals – Karl, take this for this nice punch
“Battling me wasn't a small mistake, it was massive,
Furious? Nah, You're barely bordering on passive”
Meti’s – LI,

All and all – LI came stronger, karl a very nice drop nun the less
But too Newbee for me, gotta go with LI on this one, Karl you came strong but lost it at the end

Best line
Everyone knows u wack n white...The shit Michael Jackson says is blacker than what you write...

Karl nice punch
“Battling me wasn't a small mistake, it was massive,
Furious? Nah, You're barely bordering on passive”

Vote: LI
 
Old 04-18-04, 04:35 PM   #13
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LI dat shyte was tight yo
10/10 stru
10/10 flow
10/10 voca
10/10 ovall

karl merks nice but not enough

8/10 stru
9/10 flow
8/10 voca
9/10 ovall

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Old 04-18-04, 06:17 PM   #14
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Old 04-18-04, 07:11 PM   #15
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This is going to sound like swaying, but I just got to make something clear before it's closed. LI- I can stand being beat, but not by a bunch of dick riding clowns. What do you think Basic Rules are? No Crew/Dr/Unexplained votes. Face it LI, all your punches were played. Here's my little breakdown...

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Splittin you rhymes apart...you were done from the very start...
Rappin is a given gift of art...jus dont get why herbs like u wanna take part...
Forced internal rhyming.
PM'in me beggin to battle me...claimin he is hot shit and a hard hittin emcee...
Begging? Get real, you PM'd me your site link. I never went out of my way.
Dawg im on a 9 battle winnin spree...almost didnt answer your PM cuz u a newbie...
Newbie? Okay, I don't have a shit load of posts on this account, seeing as Relaunched is the laughing stock of rap boards.
Goin a fifth of what i can truly do...throwin easy punches n its stickin like glue...
What can I say, this line is simple and unorginal.
Dog this is only your battle debut...u should stay away from PM's, look what it got u into!...
Oh no you didn't! And you call me a herb.
Use the injury bug to plague u off this site...U give RB a bad name so quickly leave, TONIGHT...
Umm, okay?
Eryone knows u wack n white...The shit Michael Jackson says is blacker than what you write...
It's blacker? Cause white people can't rap? I'm not sure what the real diss is here. After all, relaunched is filled with idiots stuck on Eminem's nuts.
Finished of wit punches and flow...Rhymes should be knwon as a prostitute for how much they blow...
Played, played, played. Surprised you never used a cum line.
You'd have more dignity wit a no show...But u dont have enough common sense so place your verse below..
Again, poorly worded
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I hope you feel good about your win.
 
 


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