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Old 03-31-04, 10:58 PM   #1
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Lightbulb another by unseen, hit me back

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i see through you, i see your flaws so conspicuously,when i spit with the mic, its clean as fuck, sewn so sinuously, your rhymes are so slow and off key, there is no redemptions, you spit like a 2 year old with minimal dimensions, and ur gonna loose some teeth and multiple dismemberment, beatin ya to the cement ur crusted on the sediment. see you know thats all ur ryhmes are doin, playin games, but wat u dont realize is how much demise i can see in ur eyes every time someone comes up and gives u a lyrical instrumental surprise, so u wanna use big words, my heart speaks thru my raps, everything u speak is elementry i allready graduated past ur weak ass raps
so instead of tryin to beat me, u should learn, study the words that come to my brain like i was spinnin the fucken yurn.
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Old 04-01-04, 04:28 AM   #2
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yo you need to work on your structer do............


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