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whenever your on again, drop immediately

im drop immediately

When I fuck I reproduce G Men outta semen
Like matrix smiths
I'll inhabit his dreams wit twisty spits N baby demons
cotastrophe happens when you step 2 me 'singin'
I injected Karlos wit 'zombie fluid'
so he'll 'involentarily bring it'
co-existence harder wit me than the devil
Envolope in the shadows
scope em under infra red light like military rapture
Karlos 'MIA' in my ghetto
Guaranteed fresh cakes when I bake when I
open up shop
like a 'fake introduction' of his block
I got Karlos 'comin out my ass'
only time this 'shit head' is hot
Karlos your a hoe
get my dick in your mouth
Your better off shot
I'll steal your 'clothes' and have you 'runnin without'

aighht...

shit how can it be g men you reproduce...
when the closest you gettin to ejaculate...
is ladiez night with ya girlfriends watchin footloose...
ill give it to ya your ryhmes were kinda complex and hard to read...
but you cant ryhme text and you need special needz...
shit you ryhme like you have just made an accomplishment...
shit you wouldnt be hot if i burnt you a case of hydrogen..
ya namez stupid no ones gona remeber you atticus...
you wouldnt be remembered if i sat you by suge knight...
and fill you with ak's on a school bus...
shit you cant spit or flow for shit...
you say you fuck so much...how you gon do that...????????
when ya got a big fat clit... haha
you droppin bombs is a catastrophe...shit ill say ya'll cause chaos...
ill smoke weed throw a whitey and you stil wouldnt go if i inject ya wid nos...
aiight im endin this little beef and takin deep breaths...
because you six feet deep and plummetin to yo death...

aiight good luck to ya'll...

upppppppppppin for sum votez 3-0 KO aiiiight

uppin for votes................................... yea imma incorporate more big words in my spits an learn 2 go crazy wit that shit... damn my shit still don't sound like its me talkin yet. uppin....

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
neither of your verses rhymed, id vote for one of you if you both werent complete jokes

yeah, y'all wut the hell was that it might as well been a no-show... hell naw. i don't know who ta pick fa real!

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u shouldve decided the winner in ^^^this post... im not good at this but atleast pick somebody...

sorry man, but did u read your verse

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118096

hit this up, it may help you

and 2 kuniva don't talk shit cuz u just as qualified as filth in rap... stop front'n.... damn the nerve and the foulness... shit... uppin

wanna battle me, we'll see who the filth is

yo sucka you got the wrong link and the wrong approach its lop sided how u came up in here talkin shit... stop makin urself look like a fool... aight i'll battle u for no reason. forreal nigga U make weird ass approaches make note of that...

what?!?!?! i said i cant vote on this cause it sucks, which it does, and everyone agrees, so lets battle faggot, set it up

I'll agree that neither of the verses had structure but they did have rhyme....
so nobody gets a structure point. i enjoyed Atticus's wordplays i thought they were awesome as hell but I'll agree both MCs need to work on alot. but as far as this battle goes I'll choose Atticus.

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step up and get merked cuz i take care of bidness/ A killa without witness from the start to the finish/ you're fallin off like you came down with tha sickness/ cuz when you step to tha Phreak I'm gonna leave you dickless

HASTA LAVISTA MUTHAFUCKA!!!
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w/e nigga only reason u wanna battle cuz i aint upped my game yet and you talkin to people about me nigga get my dick out your mouth. come to "bitch slapped"