10-20 lines
house rules
keep it legal
shadow spits first
and drop 20 min after check in

aight i'm checkin in, good luck phatty ... time to roll

yo shadow can u hit this battle up please.....
quickpunch vs marvolous i'll hit this up after uve both posted...thanks

yo if i see you wrighting shit like that in the wrong place, i'll make shure ur banded. ya dig?

Yo I step up to the mic and my heat fry the fat,
While this dog choke worse than casey at the bat
Me, I’m the satanic rapper, triple six
Can’t help but wonder, how many lyrical licks
It takes to get yo pussy wet
Beating this bitch is no sweat
This win ain’t even gonna be impressive
Cuz I bet I could win 50 successive
One time for each point of your IQ
Bitch don’t cry to momma, even she don’t like you
Each verse stinging like killer b’s
You open your mouth and we all catch z’s
Fuck you mother and catch STD’s
My lyrical alphabet bring ya to your knees
Let this rap be a lesson, hooked on phonix for ebonics
Watch as my flow get you drunk like gin and tonics
each verse brings closer the end of this disgrace
stop thinking you in interplanetary space
just cuz you run out of o2, trying to comprehend
what don’t you understand bitch, this is your end.

ok heres my verse

lyrical lick dez nuts faget ass shadow edge
the neerest u get to pussy is estreledge
i'll take the light and leave you in shadow
knowlade has left you, and std's were bestowed
i'll win 50 times but only once go toe-to-toe
homie im a GI Joe, a fighting man from head-to-toe
you say you fucked my mom that is cinda funny to me
but ain't you the one that said she had stds?
u got recycled lines that are repetative like a marquee
go on the internet and go on a rap shoping spree
but i can deal with ur bittin to a tolorable degree
no raps, just words rhyming in a matter of speach
just a 20 line sentence that yells "My shits oblique!"

Flow- Shadow
Punches- Shadow
Multis- Phat
Personals- Shadow

Nigga pretty much just sonned ya. Just was hittin' madd on point and just had it basically. Phat, flow was kinda basic, didn't seem like you really tried. Think your punches coulda been a lot harder.

Yo I step up to the mic and my heat fry the fat,
While this dog choke worse than casey at the bat
Me, I’m the satanic rapper, triple six
Can’t help but wonder, how many lyrical licks
It takes to get yo pussy wet
Beating this bitch is no sweat

When you start it like that, there ain't no turnin' back.

Vote/ Shadow's Edge

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ahaha.. good job feeding all your shit off my rhyme and still sucking ass. learn how to spell. yo everyone vote on this thing.

ok noo hatin so read carefully

shadow-better punches...flow was decent(work on it),multies and structure was very good and creative...

Phat mic-punches wasnt hott,flow was very good,structure was ight,multies u tried but sounded they same...

vote-shadow...

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thats total hate vote man, why have have to do that?

Good battle fellah's

Punchs - Shadow
Personals - Shadow
Flow/Structure - Mic
Creativity - Shadow (mic don't feed of verses not very creative at all)
Multi's - Mic (he did have the better multi's)
Metah's - I felt neither had good metah's

ok Shadow ur rhyme scheme didn't flow that creat in some parts ex.

Yo I step up to the mic and my heat fry the fat,
While this dog choke worse than casey at the bat
Me, I’m the satanic rapper, triple six
Can’t help but wonder, how many lyrical licks
It takes to get yo pussy wet
Beating this bitch is no sweat

^^see how u fell of at the end there

Work on yah multi's and rhyme structure other then that u had a good battle verse. Altho some of ur punchs where played i.e.

Let this rap be a lesson, hooked on phonix for ebonics
Watch as my flow get you drunk like gin and tonics

^heard it before in many diff. ways

You open your mouth and we all catch z’s
Fuck you mother and catch STD’s

^I think we all have heard that 1

Mic man u can't play off ppl's verse's esp. on the net doing it face to face is fine, but on the net it's just wack. I liked tho how near the end u started getting creative, and jumped off his verse, and started actually writing something ur own. Punchs, and personals where all flipped, and not hard hitting

overall my vote goes to shadow

Plz vote on my battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118478

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ok another battle i need 50 posts to vote on grrrr all that time wasted for nothing

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^My crew bringing the heat 24/7

Soundclick Page

^Currently hosting 2 Freestyles, and 1 Writin

Aight shadows edge u worthy come and get some of E.Miles. show me that every one on this site ain't as horrible as I think

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Yo everyone vote on my other battles as well.. no whack 50 post min that I know of:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118568
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1224680

This was a tough battle shadow had better flow, but Phat had harder punches. I gotta give it to Phat for complexity, and Shadow had a better opener. HOld on I'm a re-read these.......ya,Phat kinda fell off in the middle, while Shadow was semi-solid the whole way through.

This line killed thought, u got recycled lines that are repetative like a marquee
go on the internet and go on a rap shoping spree
but i can deal with ur bittin to a tolorable degree
no raps, just words rhyming in a matter of speach
just a 20 line sentence that yells "My shits oblique!"

So all in all I'm a give this one to Phat, tought battle, both did a great job