14 yrz old nigga and new to da site, battle ne1 dun care how good, not scared of ne1 dun believe me check da flo..
I aint gotda patience to wait around for bitches numbaz in da bar,
Stay G'd up wit 100 grand in each pocket n i aint talkin bout da candy bar
Im dat crazi niggah gettin hed in da bathroom stalls,
Wen he tryta use tha rubba it slip off cuz his dick too small
Cuttin lyrical persisions while ya ass is sleepin,
Nigga im like a 2 incher i just cant be BEATEN
Niggaz filled wit envy and dey on jealousy runz
Cuz i got enuff paper to stuff up an elephants trump
Im not new to dis ima rap legend a fuckin superstar,
And I stab niggaz up like dey ata fuckin sushi bar!
I raise da gat to ya bak wit da bullets penetratin ya clothes
Ya ass is resemblin a fuckin Sponge witall dem punctured holes..Holla at me

Decent stuff. Talking bout gats if u don't have weakens the delivery (not saying u don't have). Over inflating yourself is repetitive too. Decent work overall though.

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yea that is decent i give you props for what you got in you and plus your age all i can say is ....TALENT......1

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hey yo im known to play it low//
dont confuse me with these cornballs on the radio//


ima true hustlah you couldnt fit in my shoes//
my pager buzz to much man my hips are bruised//

faMBa$e Bitch ass niggas Bean Town thats how im doing it....enjoy life make money.....death b4 dishonor
trust no body that aint your fam and fuck that you cant even trust them some times i cant even trust myself lil niggas.....1

yea it was was straight pretty decent for being14 keep it u'll get better trust me do sum battles