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GB Killa | 0 | 0% | |
Sten. Cell | 5 | 100.00% | |
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03-31-04, 05:25 PM | #1 | |
Beyond Comprehention
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Sten. Cell Vs. GB Killa
IP: CDBE 76F0
10 lines
No Crew Votes No DR Votes No Feedin Due By Tom. Midnight
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03-31-04, 05:29 PM | #2 | |
Beyond Comprehention
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IP: CDBE 76F0
Check Check
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03-31-04, 06:08 PM | #3 |
New to RB
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IP: 033A 6084
here i am ill go first......................................
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03-31-04, 06:14 PM | #4 |
New to RB
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IP: 033A 6084
ill be right back you go first222222222222222222222'
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03-31-04, 07:31 PM | #5 |
New to RB
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IP: 033A 6084
ill spit my first line then send you to bed/
after my 2nd line you gana wish u wre dead/ then come #'s 3 and 4/ ur the type of bitch to go out the back/ when i come in the front door/ this is an auction dog and you ant got no money for biddin/ thinkin u could beat me, who the fuck were u kiddin/ wit a name like Sten. Cell. I shouldn't have battled you/ just grabed u up and broke ur fucking back like a Pen. Cell. |
04-13-04, 06:41 PM | #6 | |
Beyond Comprehention
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IP: CDBE 76F0
See Wats Sad Is This Kids' Raps Seems Padded.../
Cause I Sleep On His White Sheets Like A Craft-Matic/ Ya Raps' Had It,I Drop "Dope Lines" Like A Bad Habit/ Brains You Lack Kid,YaCents Is Owed Like God Tabbed-It/ Im Dis-Carding Your Gestures Cause I Fear No Jokes/ He Strokes & Blows Off Cam Like Breaks In "Queer As Folk"/ Off Hand I Of-tan Cough And Blow Thru This Kid's Tissues/ So Ill Stop His Bad Writtens Like Cancelled Magazine Issues/ I Cut It Short.My Fault For Never Dropping.I Completely Forgot.
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04-13-04, 08:47 PM | #7 |
Miss Me?
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my vote
IP: D5EA 4189
ok bar by bar breakdown....
ill spit my first line then send you to bed/ after my 2nd line you gana wish u wre dead/ weak punch...every1 always says ur gonna wish u were dead...2/10 then come #'s 3 and 4/ ur the type of bitch to go out the back/ when i come in the front door/ ZzZzZ...boring...1/10 this is an auction dog and you ant got no money for biddin/ thinkin u could beat me, who the fuck were u kiddin/ Not a good punch...boring...2/10 wit a name like Sten. Cell. I shouldn't have battled you/ just grabed u up and broke ur fucking back like a Pen. Cell. HORRIBLE PERSONAL....0/10 Verse Score... 5/40 ok...work on everything...u need to use personals (correctly)....need to not stretch ya bars....use direct punches....elevate is all i can say.... See Wats Sad Is This Kids' Raps Seems Padded.../ Cause I Sleep On His White Sheets Like A Craft-Matic/ nice punch...good opener...8/10 Ya Raps' Had It,I Drop "Dope Lines" Like A Bad Habit/ Brains You Lack Kid,YaCents Is Owed Like God Tabbed-It/ Nice multi's and a hard hitting punch...like this line fasho...9/10 Im Dis-Carding Your Gestures Cause I Fear No Jokes/ He Strokes & Blows Off Cam Like Breaks In "Queer As Folk"/ Nice punch and meta....7/10 Off Hand I Of-tan Cough And Blow Thru This Kid's Tissues/ So Ill Stop His Bad Writtens Like Cancelled Magazine Issues/ Nice closer....good punch....8/10 Verse Score.... 32/40 ok it was clear u were better n had the better verse....keep elevatin...no real advice jus suggest ya fix dat structure...."/"'s make u look like a newbie... return the favor.... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119160
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04-13-04, 09:03 PM | #8 | |
Beyond Comprehention
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IP: CDBE 76F0
1-0 Me....
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04-14-04, 04:31 PM | #9 | |
Beyond Comprehention
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IP: CDBE 76F0
Rise.
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04-15-04, 12:37 AM | #10 | ||
Beyond Comprehention
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IP: CDBE 76F0
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04-15-04, 03:50 PM | #11 | |
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04-16-04, 12:04 AM | #12 |
Flyweight
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IP: EC0B 84C7
ok man Stencell took this battle by far ass hell the other dudes verse was shit!!!
compare to stencell the honest true i dont have to explain my self its ovious just read the battle foks.... Vote=Stencell easyli took it can u vote me-vs-pictureperfect-2 peace.......... |
04-16-04, 01:07 AM | #13 | |
Light Weight
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IP: D513 C948
aight, damn, sucky ass structure and everything to tha loser
haha, kinda: See Wats Sad Is This Kids' Raps Seems Padded.../ Cause I Sleep On His White Sheets Like A Craft-Matic/ haha, foreal: Im Dis-Carding Your Gestures Cause I Fear No Jokes/ He Strokes & Blows Off Cam Like Breaks In "Queer As Folk"/ kinda sophisticated: Off Hand I Of-tan Cough And Blow Thru This Kid's Tissues/ So Ill Stop His Bad Writtens Like Cancelled Magazine Issues/ loser, elavate like a mothafucka V/ Sten
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04-16-04, 01:23 AM | #14 | |
The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 4289 77F4
aiight this wasnt a close battle at all sten. cell took this battle for his first bar....nice wordplay multis were sick punches was nice...gb killa ya need to work on ya structure a little man shyt was kinda hard to follow...and you had no wordplay..vocab was simple..on tha real thos GB killa go get a dictionary..might help ya verse
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04-17-04, 11:44 AM | #15 | |
Beyond Comprehention
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