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03-24-04, 04:47 PM
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Give me Feedback
IP: E3CA 7CA2
hey give me feedback tell me if is good or how i could make it better ok here it goes
When i spit my Lyricks ya'll bitches be tripping/ ya'll think what i be saying is only hating/ you assume you're the best when you still havent passed the test/ i'm telling you this shit cuz i've been through that shit/ yeah i'm new in this shit but i'm not new in the game/ so don't be hatin when you're reading my shit just remember you aint got shit/ like 2pac said "every step would be death until you're the last nigga left/ peace and keep it G |
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03-24-04, 05:01 PM
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"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
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IP: 7C40 358D
for one dawg TRIPPING dosnt rhyem wit HATING
TEST and SHIT dont rhy;mes GAME and SHIT dont rhyme i dont get what your doing dawg are you drunk or somptin |
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03-24-04, 05:03 PM
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IP: 4C8F 0F5D
I Need To JoiN a GrOup/Crew oR Summin lol
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03-24-04, 05:12 PM
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
hey so what should i put
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03-24-04, 08:34 PM
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IP: AB1B E7C4
wow you really suck bitch ass cant rhym sorry to be honest
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03-26-04, 05:32 AM
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....Trunks R 4 Bodies....
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IP: 3240 794D
its garbage nigga!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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03-26-04, 11:22 AM
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
check this one out
I come swiftly and easy bitches are amazed when they see me/ i leave bitches and hoes pleasing and asking for more/ while you only got one bitch that is fucking with another nigga, and its not you bitch!/ you probably do'nt understand this bitches well i do/ i understand this bitches like if they were the ABC"s yo/ thug you need to reflex do'nt get too into a bitch/ all they do is leave you for another nigga that is wearing a ecko shirt and some nike's/ it aint worth that shit/ i'm telling you one thing though fuck bitches and leave bitches forget all them bitches they're just mothefucking hoes/ all i'm saying is advise thugs take it for granted. Look i do'nt know but what do you think its not done yet, but i need some more ideas, tell me some  |
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03-26-04, 11:32 AM
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Dont Push Me Of Regret It
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IP: EED2 4F8F
sorry man but im burtaly honset..both were wack..itjust to simple...plus you bite the 2pac rhyme...u cant use some elses line in ur rhyme man u will get no respect 4 it....so evaluate....no beef...just being honest..na wot i mean
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03-26-04, 11:33 AM
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....Trunks R 4 Bodies....
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IP: 3240 794D
garbage........................................... ..................
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03-26-04, 11:49 AM
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
get more complex, cuz it sounds like an elementry school rap.
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03-26-04, 11:55 AM
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IP: 3240 794D
it doesnt even sound like rap...........
sound like your talking to someone....... |
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03-26-04, 12:21 PM
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
ya'll just hating because i talked bull about you guys first
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03-26-04, 12:50 PM
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
gambino, elementry school kids cant rap.
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03-26-04, 02:41 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
hmmm where to begin your wack as fuck and need to elevate be more creative and dont listen to the hate for real just step up look at some of the tutorials on here and then keep at it
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03-26-04, 05:40 PM
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IP: C1DA C961
let me say this and this may da ja voo but u suck and i didnt hear you talkin bull. go to the open mic and insulteded in there this is not the place
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