check it ghost, i'm ready to rhyme

u know tha rules

10 lines min
15 lines max
no d/r
no hate

u spit first.

Now drop ure shit and i'll follow.

ite checkin in
gimme 30 minutez for this blind spit

check it

let u know ima flow in this bytch like"Pacz spirit"im"ghostly"/
lyricz makin ya head "spin" like "ring around the rosie"/
ill take ya name "franchize" like im in a #3 rocketz jersey/
got "hot barz" meltin u like a stove top "hershey"/
u betta off gettin a sex change an switchin to francine/
leave the u.k.,get at"kay slay"an become the"drama queen"/
if that dont work u can alwayz belly dance on broadway/
be on stage dressed like ya av in a homoerotic produced play/
thinkin u ready to rhyme, but sound like u ready to square dance/
find the time,to get that camel toe from showin in them tite pantz/


im only doin 10 didnt really feal like postin

Nice spit, now check this shit

in my last battle u said i need 2 use more metaphors//
u fuckin annoyin like a crazy bitch with menopause//
u may be the ghost but i'll be the one 2 scare//
i leave u cryin in the corner with nasty stains in ure underwear//
ure rhymes stink like a fat man with diarrhoea//
ure about as popular as an in-bred with gonorrhoea//
with that tired ass spit u wrote ure own will//
i'm like oxide & neutrino cuz i shoot 2 kill//
u call ureself a rapper yet u aint got no flow//
u really work at pizza hut, i'll take a 12 inch to go//
so u think i'm a bitch who cant cut it with you//
with ure dick its like scooby-doo..."Where the fuck are you?"//
if i was in ure shoes i'd be ready to migrate//
u can't get no play, here's a dildo......set it to vibrate.//

come on playaz
lets get some votes on this shit

^ thatz how u posta do it thatz better
uppin

yo much respect 2 u 4 tha advice
guess that shit worked
gud battle!!

c'mon up these votes man
send me the links 2 and i'll give an honest vote to ure battles

wats up wit u people
get in here and vote and if u drop tha links i'll drop a vote on y'all battles

both of u came good in this battle but i tink franchise player came a bit harder
twisting the script feel me...


Vote=Franchise

with ure dick its like scooby-doo..."Where the fuck are you?"// fanchises best line

ill take ya name "franchize" like im in a #3 rocketz jersey/ ghost's best line

those are more of what u need, take other things *(word play) and turn them into punches, das what battlin is all about. to really take a battle have every bar do that.
ghost played off franchise's name really good, but fran had a better finisher, wit another wordplay punch. fran had two of 'em and ghost had one real punch
vote-franchise
get at my other battles

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thanx 4 tha votes playas
Truth u need to poll vote as well as just postin it
Get votin on my other battles homeys

franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374
franchiZe 0-1 Shadows edge
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290
franchiZe 0-0 $$upreme
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293
franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176

up these fuckin votes man cuz i need 2 free up a spot soon
i'll vote on ures 2 if u vote on mine

franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374
franchiZe 1-1 Shadows edge
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290
franchiZe 0-0 $$upreme
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293
franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176

uppin these votes man

vote on my ova battles and i'll return da favour
franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374
franchiZe 1-3 Shadows edge
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290
franchiZe 0-4 $$upreme
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293
franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176
franchiZe 1-0 Ghost354
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335